PrimordialSeven
I'm giving myself 5 stars again. I can only apologise to everyone who told me to continue, I failed you guys... well SIKE, I guess?? I'm back bit*hes!!!
Kool
Spoiler!!!!I got to chapter 177 and here I leave it, at first the novel was great, but then it lacked information for example: what exactly happened with Randy, a summary of the two years that passed, tell the training that he did alone or that he killed a person. Now suddenly the sister appears and they say almost nothing about that, the only thing I have seen is a lot of information about video games, non-existent romance, he talked about acting and he stayed there, as if he had never talked about him. . , and it would have been good if he had had some danger, for example that they tried to kill him and he was injured by bullets or something similar, everything was very quiet thanks to the protection of his grandmother. Thank you anyway
This is a very good story pls keep writing and also can you give me some tips on how to improve my story and pls go check out the story 'The Devil's hitman'. i just uploaded it today THANK YOU!
Shameless review. Good story. Author listens to readers and is attentive to readers wish’s and comments. They are also active. I can’t really find any downside on the spot, but over all it may have so problem but it is a good novel in general.
why the fck they dont pick this one for 2 week whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!is webnovel idiot why the fck they dont pick this one for 2 week whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!is webnovel idiot why the fck they dont pick this one for 2 week whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!is webnovel idiot why the fck they dont pick this one for 2 week whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!is webnovel idiot
Legend of Futian.... Lengend Of Liantian hopefully this will be as good as AGM tbh was the first webnovel I read which I thought is better then coiling dragon. Maybe if they add a bit more comedy it’ll be like LOHP
This is a fantastic read, so sad it is on trail! The MC is funny, cruel, smart, and cunning! He doesn’t boast about his strength! He doesn’t hide his strength, but stays calm in every situation. His best feature is his mind! I really want to see how far he goes, and how many more disciples he can get!
this child is fking garbage....no fillal piety and arrogant to the nine heavens......cocky and thinks he is entitled to the workds wealth with a god complex and im just getting started
nice story, hope for more. thank you.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This system type..Good Novel but not suitable for everyoneRead 1st 20 chapter before dropping it..It's fun and enjoyable..
thanks for making one of the best DXD fanfictions out there. I really love the concept of the story that you have made. I can't wait to see what you have instore for the readers next
