Pretty cool Novelhas potentialI'm sure more exciting scenes await us as we progress.I believe it will attract more readers as time goes on.I also hope she has a strong partner that supports the lead character,Hate-harem, I hope no haremGood luck
and that's that huh. I'm going to assume you intended to take a break and it turned into an extended hiatus on this work. probably started writing another book? or maybe you didnt know where to go from here and didnt want to drop the quality writing just to churn more chapters out? Either way, I really enjoyed the story. There was more character growth in this short 200 chapter story than quite a few 1000 plus chapter xianxias... the story telling just seemed to improve with each chapter too. I found myself engaged and engrossed with the story, to the point where I didn't even notice the many grammatical issues. My absolute favorite part was the constant introspection of the main character. it really made the character come to life, and made me care for his struggles. While the world building was the weakest part of the story besides the grammar issues, it was not that bad and certainly served its purpose for the story. I wish you all the best Author, and maybe you will one day come back to this novel, inspired, and write it to a satisfactory conclusion. Afterall, we didn't even get to see Ayda meeting Dearie before it cut off! i looked forward to some cat fights between the two haha
Man, this site is down BAAAAD, it's gotten to parodying parodies level bad, this is a clone of another chinese ability steal premise book, just 10 times worse, that in turn was again a heavily inspired clone of that Korean manhwa/light novel franchise talent swallowing magician that even directly ripped off some small tropes from it, god awful!
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Hey author, I must say, you're developing a lot more than the first time! I can see your dedication and passion. Your plot is indeed unique, but the character is quite blah(reminds me of Saiki Kun). I don't normally read system stories but this kept me coming for more! The world building could be a bit faster but not going to complain about that, seen worse. Overall, it's great!
starting chapter 40 above. . quality drop. kind of better version of mtl. dropping this for now
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I have really enjoyed following the story to its end and have to say that like some of your other works it’s really enjoyable and I do recommend it though like your other works with endings it feels rushed and leaves me highly unsatifaited.
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The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
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