LONGLIN
Literally the best thing I've read on the Internet. The character is well thought out, he has ambitions, and his personal life is also well shown
I know I have only read the first chapter, but I feel like I'm missing something. Does this novel have a first book/volume?? I even checked the author's account, but it doesn't seem like it has, so I'm confused with the introduction, or will there be further explanations later on about the mc background and the power systems cause it's feels like I'm missing a lot
If you read her other stories than you'll know the quality of the writing for the diabetes you'll get! ? This couple is introduced from Susus book so if you seen their interactions, you'll know what's coming ?
great storyline can't wait for more like this
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I read till chpter 119. I have given this novel plenty of chances despite the rough beggining. The early plots were just the same as one novel i read before i think it ws i will kill the author. Despite this i gave it a shot as i wanted to see where this would go next. I was quite relieved that it was a good one since the mc was calm and smart. He was dense as a japanese beta mc thugh despite the author giving him background of having past relationships. But what ticked me off the most was the forced plot of character development. The authour wuld pull some bs reasons why the mc lost to the rank 2 and if that wasnt enough development he would beat him and lose to the rank one with another bs that the rank 1 awakened his second gift. Also the girls were somehow interested in him from the start with the reason of hes interesting well hes really not he was the weakest in the rank A class but somehow hes the point of interest. I would understand it nore if he was noticed after the fact of being promoted in rank faster than them. I especially hate the heroine Cecilia whose supposedly a sociopath that keeps fking with the mc. Overall, the plot in the beggining was ok even though it had similarities with the other novel and the flow of the pacing was great. The characters felt alive with each having thier on unique emotions sometimes getting along to each other and fighting when teasing one another. Ghe only problem I had was the forced plots for character development of the MC. Im sure it could have been done better the reasoning behind it was so unreasonable. Dont even get me started about the cringe speeches his friends gave him after he lost it felt so forced and out of place. On the other hand im also not a fan of having multiple entities behind the scenes manipulating the mc, one of which erased his fking memory when he got a gift and they were never mentioned again.
You know, if he want to, he can eat us in one bite.
"Okay now ..."
"Kids are you done yet?" asked the teacher.
"Dahyun Nakamoto, Same age as yours, From Osaka"
years of the IT development the generic PC hardware works over
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
