In a world where Creators exist somehow the only plot that the author has is kids fighting for some chick and making the first 2 chapters just to establish that we know that he has potential but everyone else thinks he is trash. ....In ResumeThis is a Standard Chinese novel, I wouldn't expect anything good to come from this in future chapters.
those i marked at 3 star is due to how few chapter so far, the story itself is interesting and at least the mc interactions with the demonic lady is quite entertaining. I'd recommend giving it a shot
As I have seen by now, you have a great reader support as many votes for your works. This means that many were backing you up. Keep improving and writing as you will improve later on in due time. Your story quality was there and plot was complex enough. Making also a cultivation novel speaks that you are a culitivation fan. Good luck on the Spirity! Hope to see you in December! hehe ?
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Good story. tlTranslation could be better but it was worth the struggle in the end.
reluctantly read15 chapters . i didn't like it.Chinese novels, guy going out for trouble. and every passersby becomes extreme busy buddy . end of the day he finds trouble and kill people left right. no other character than MC
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Excellent start. Nice characterisarions. Thorougly enjoyed every line of the story. Looking forward for the next part. This story will definitely rock. Good luck.
This is a renewed review where I will give you guys the pros and cons according to what I believe. See if it fits your taste before giving it a try, even though I hope that you will like it.Pros: 1) I review most chapters countless times, to make sure that the grammar is adequate and the details and describing of the scenes is detailed enough 2) Everything, including the reincarnation isn't random, but there is a bigger plot behind them (which you can find when you reach around chapter 54-563) MC isn't a simp. There is romance in the story, and it starts around chapter 150, but it isn't the type of <>(No spoilers, I believe you guys will understand once you start reading).4) I could list some more things, but I realize that they would spoil part of the story, so I'm leaving the rest for you guys.Now, here are the cons1) There are some cliche scenes like a pre-arranged fiance, but there is a bigger plot behind them as well.2) The MC was an orphan before his reincarnation, and his character grows throughout the story. 3) The only thing that I haven't decided yet on the story is the harem. I want to have a harem but everything must be natural and there have to be feelings involved. At the same time, I haven't decided if there will be 2-3 women or 8-9. This is something that I will discover along with you guys as we progress through the story.Aside from everything listed above, I just want you to enjoy the story.
the story in beginnin its pretty good but latter became a bit borring , it would be good if it was a non-harem and just develop the relationship with Stacey
Keep writing! I love it?✨
wonderful book I loved it you have a amazing talent