LONGLIN
This is a masterpiece my guy, keep up the good work.
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Ohhhhhh myyyyyy GOD the start is good but then the longer it goes the mc started becoming a jerk and a fucking dumbass in the later chapters (based on my research from other sites!!)???and then his oath sister become his ****ing wife and married again fucking psycho old hag who forced marry him and then blablabla???? good style but poor plot and character design
It's alright. Very dull and uninspired but doesn't really have any actual negatives, but not any real positives either. The 'cheat' or 'talent' gets almost completely phased out after the first 20 chapters or so and only comes up once every 50 chapters or something. WARNING to readers, 242 chapters are very well translated but C243 is taken over by the killer of novels 549 who cannot translate properly so it's not worth reading anymore at that point. Typical WN.If you pay for this beyond 242 you're an idiot.
OMG, I will totally agree to what the rest of the reviewers have mentioned. I had goosebumps while reading the first chapter alone. One word Impeccable. The plot, the writing style everything seems to be a class apart. I bow to the author. Way to go.
Awesome, good read, raw plsraw plsraw plsraw plsraw plsraw plsraw plsraw plsraw plsraw plsraw plsraw plsraw plsraw plsraw plsraw pls
Why are the updates so slow??? That is the only thing holding this back.for me.
The translation quality and speed is fine but I feel like the pacing and story development is so infuriatingly bad that giving anything higher than one star would be unfair to anyone who starts reading the story. The author has officially been lost in a single 'climb the tower' arc now for hundreds of chapters. The chapters are so long winded and filled with nonsense that it makes the filler in TMW and MW seem tame. If you do feel a desire to read this story wait until it is over 500 chapters. Apparently the author gets his sh*t together by then.
Great story. The plot has become slower and the update took very long to release but all in all love this story! It would have been great if the chapter had a little more content that would have made the story more enjoyable. The way the main character uses his skills is really great. Hopefully the next update comes out sooner
Truly among the best stories I have read especially of this type. The MC is aware of how he influences the martial arts he creates. A steady development, a solid world promotion and the ending for me is satisfying . Only problem is the minor inconsistency in names especially with Meng Chong overally it's very good
It started light then became incredible. Author's style of writing is good and I enjoyed reading the first ten chapters. I am hooked and will definitely read more.
MC ruined it for me. Don't want to spoil anything, but this novel is not worth reading even as a trial read. Already deleted previous review since some people might say I'm too serious or overreacting.
