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"Yeah. I agree…. It doesn't feel right."
Not wanting her daughter to be humiliated, Xiao Lou spoke.
Yang Xin who was trying to gather everyone stopped in her tracks as she felt her cultivation rising up and reaching again the Black Gold Rank...
The two split up to search while two others soon followed after.
"So, is today considered our first day?"
"Why of course!" They smile at me.
'' Oi! Start singing! No other details!'' Aldrich said.
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Jackson's face scrunched up in a mix of confusion and anger, the most emotion that Aaron saw from him as of late. In the back of his mind, Aaron couldn't help but find it funny to be told off in sign language, of course he'd never say that to Jackson.
Sarang glanced down into her small clammy hands, she knew she was partly to blame for letting go of her mom's hands. It terrified her not knowing where their mom had gone, her eyes began to water as her little hiccups came out blocking her from crying out loud. With the one free arm she had left Sarang placed it over her face sobbing quietly.
It's good bro can't wait to read more chapters ahead.??
It's nothing special. The MC's golden finger is ridiculously overpowered, but he doesn't fully exploit it, which is pretty frustrating. He collects women, but they serve no real purpose in the story other than acting as cultivation furnaces to speed up his progress. They add nothing to the plot or character development.The novel is also filled with unnecessary filler. Every chapter wastes about a quarter of its length on background characters yapping about nothing important. It adds absolutely nothing to the story.On top of that, the MC has an insanely overpowered clone ability. He can create around 100 clones, each retaining 100% of his original strength. But guess what? He barely uses it. The only thing he does with it is send one clone out to search for treasures. When facing large groups of enemies, he never takes advantage of his clones at all. Later on, when demons invade the human world and far outnumber the humans, the MC acts all worried despite how brokenly powerful he is. It’s like he doesn’t even realize his own strength.I could go on, but let’s move on. The characters are completely shallow. Every enemy acts the same, fights the same way, and repeats the same lines. It gets so repetitive that I end up skipping fights altogether. Everything feels artificial and one-dimensional, almost like the MC is in a dream where everything conveniently works in his favor.I have to admit, the beginning was good and had potential. But after chapter 300, and now at chapter 584, every arc and event feels like a repetitive cycle. The story and writing never evolve beyond a flat, one-dimensional experience. Overall, this novel had promise, but it eventually became dull and predictable, both in storytelling and writing quality.
