I actually quite enjoy this novel. From the characters, their various interactions, the world building, even the sometimes questionable and overly mysterious plot. Author also does well in regard to not neglecting the harem members despite their continued growth in number, they each have a unique charm that sets them apart from one another. My main gripe with this novel is in how the author refuses to advance the MC’s Order. Anyone familiar with this genre have all read novels where the MC would be stagnant at a single level for dozens if not 100-200 chapters, but at least the reasons given were understandable and weren’t worth harping over. Here, that isn’t remotely close to being the problem as the MC advances by means of XP. The issue here is that it’s been accumulating for hundreds of chapters and the MC advances at a snails pace or not at all even if the situation calls for it. He can be facing death and rather than use the XP he has to perhaps make a last ditch effort, on several occasions he has just accepted the fact that he may just die. Isn’t that absolutely ridiculous? At this point, it’s clear that the author is just using this as a plot device to introduce more challenges to the MC and increase tension, but it’s done poorly and feels forced every single time. The initial excuse was that the MC wanted to refine his powers before advancing, then after a time it changed to him not arousing suspicion from others if he were to advance too fast. Previously, that made sense, but as of now when he should(author somehow always manages to introduce someone who can threaten his life every few dozen chapters) have no equal outside of the Main Continent, those reasons no longer matter. As of late, I had hope that he’d finally start utilizing his XP and advancing because apparently he can easily reach Peak 6th Order and it was stated that he’d start being less cautious, but not even a dozen chapters later and he almost dies once again. The author may as well be treating his readers as a joke at this point with such a glaring flaw in the story that has not been addressed after so long of many people pointing it out. Still a good read, but prepare yourself to be frustrated to no end when this type of situation continues to occur.
The author surely knows how to conduct a great story amidst the elements of warfare this is great. the beginning was gripping, and excellently crafted by the author. it shows the tension there is stress in the air. id recommend this book!! its very different from books here on web novel
This reminds of one of the statements of a character in arifureta light novel or webnovel was it...... It was said there that if there was a camera man there at their summoning it would be the strongest class...??????????????
I absolutely loooooooooove this novel, like- I love the story, the characters, their interactions so far and I also love the author, and the way she writes, so yeah, this a 10/10 for me. I'm also loving the mass release you're making this week ann-nim.
Good story. Please continue updating more author . ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ngl I have been reading romance novels lately and I cant wait for this one even though its in the eyes of the male lead.So I will leave it at 4 stars
This novel is too overrated.The translation sucks. I could feel my brain cells dieing just trying to read this.Anyone who is going to read this, read with caution.
this thing got picked? the editors must be high as a kite.not to mention this is basically a fanfic of the novel and not a translation. since it changes the settings and characters.
Another great action to add to my collection. I also love how you write your grammar is really nice. I expect good works in the future. Keep up the good work author
The story is almost exclusively told to the readers. Almost 10 chapters were just a slightly altered rehash of the movie. Everything comes too easily. There is (in my opinion) next to no story. I've no interest in the MC as there's nothing relatable. I react more emotionally to all the bashing of corporate greed ruining good games then I do the blank MC. Perhaps the writing improves but I can't tell as of yet. The concept is interesting and may be the saving grace of the whole thing. As long as you're alright reading a story that's told to you and are more interested in the idea of the story than good writing this can be an okay read. Personally I'd love to read this once it is rewritten though I don't think that'll happen.
If not for the update rates, i will give this five star review.I love this novel, 5/5. It has an interesting world, good pacing and a main character I really like. I think the thing I like the most about the novel is that though the MC decision and a more tend to alpha male, they are still somewhat realistic and consistent with the established personality of the MC.
I highly recommend reading this novel and here's why:It's writing quality is at a professional level and it makes the reading quite enjoyable. It's clear and non reiterative. This author's creativity is also off the charts!It completely exceeded my expectations!For anyone out there trying to find a good read, this is definitely worth the while.(as a plus, you won't end with less neurons after reading it)