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I'm loving the development of the story, and when will Star Dragons be released again?I really like Damián's character. But I also love Pierre Durand's dramatic development.
Overall everything is very good but author should improve his writing skill.
First, short chapters and a lot of filler.Second, in this story EVERYONE is a good person, NO ONE has bad intentions. It's not realistic.Third, MC divulges his secrets to everyone.130+ chapters and it's been less than 2 months.MC is too naive, too kind.When MC goes on a trip with companions, their names are NEVER mentioned.
A masterpiece from a great mind, I appreciate your work author, keep it going please
Awesome storyline, I feel so sad about the kids, but I'm sure this story is bound to have a happy ending. It's a journey I'll have to embark on and I'm fully ready for it. Kudos to the author....your novel is captivating
for those who need to know chapter 9 is very good it stick to the storyline and very uh I don't know how to put it into words but f this author knows his story!
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Very good set up and original idea with good living character which can be connected to. The ability is balanced allowing for growth of the character being lengthy not like most system novels were the power level skyrockets
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Fantastic imagination and character designing is on pleasing level..!!All should definitely read this story because it is full of super twists and turns..!! Author should be appreciated for this fine work..!!
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