great story. good character development. the author has a special way of discription but I update for the book should be frequent. like a schedule or something. ...️
Really Good read! Not too realistic, not too unrealistic. Perfect proportions.
This novel serves as a clear example of how to underutilize a promising concept. The plot revolves around a man who, summoned as a hero, defeats the demon king, gets betrayed, and ultimately meets his demise. Then, decades later, he reincarnates as a hero to seek revenge against his former allies. While the basic premise is familiar, it still holds potential.
The protagonist's transformation, while initially sympathetic, feels rushed. He goes from advocating peace and forgiveness to seeking vengeance in a matter of days, which lacks credibility. Additionally, the villains lack depth and consistency, resembling generic anime tropes without any unique development. The encounters with these antagonists become monotonous and unengaging.
The supporting characters, though having some background, mainly serve as plot devices, offering information or assisting the main characters. Their roles are minor, and they lack the impact necessary to elevate the story. The narrative style, with excessive dialogue and minimal description, detracts from the overall reading experience.
Despite these shortcomings, the novel possesses some redeeming qualities, such as the well-crafted female lead, who defies typical gender stereotypes. Her character development and dynamic relationship with the protagonist add interest to the story.
In conclusion, I would rate this novel 2.5 out of 5, acknowledging its potential but lamenting the wasted opportunities. It managed to keep me engaged until the end, but the lack of exploration of its ideas left me wanting more. This is merely my personal perspective, and others might find different aspects worth enjoying. Lastly, please excuse any grammatical errors, as English is not my first language.
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So I found the machine translation for this novel and read it all. I can confidently say that this novel is totally worth it. The main character (MC) is really smart and excels at setting traps on her path to revenge. The male lead (ML) is incredibly handsome and has a deep affection for the MC. There are plenty of fluffy moments, as well as some truly satisfying ones. I really appreciate how the author crafted this novel. The pacing is just right, and all the magic and alchemy that the MC uses to showcase her abilities are thoughtfully executed. I thoroughly enjoyed it and highly recommend it. ?
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Try -kingdom building-
Tyranny of steel (completed)
Release that witch (completed)
-strong pets-
I am not the evil god lackey (completed)
Astral pet store (completed)
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P.s. if someone points out a geniune issue with the story and has read more then 700 chapters before droping it don't dislike those comments
Started reading it a few days ago and I'm enjoying it a lot more than I expected to, so I recommend it if yuan have an open minded reading personality about trying something a little unique.
It is really light cute novel. It is also translated well. There some scenes and characters that I wish the author should delve more or added more scenes for the FL and ML to have more deeper feeling to each other. I don't know maybe it just me, I feel like their sudden deep feeling for each other doesn't make sense or is it just like the novel is too fast paced. The first few chapters is really fun but it became a bit boring towards the end, I also feel like the epilogue is rushed. If you want something to read that is not complicated at all and you just want to read something new with no high expectations, I recommend this novel.
cuando saldran mas capitulos?
HUH WHY IS HE WHITE ON THE COVER
the Author is not at fault here, the novel was put through basic google translate and then posted. The "translator" is the problem.
I'm gonna say the romance in this novel was a bit too rushed. It feels like in the blink of an eye, the woman have to get married with a comatose person and then she got pregnant and finally give a birth to a child. The female lead also doesn't have any aura. It just feels weird. It seems like female lead is not truly important. And next, male lead was too restrained. He can't do anything due to his wife, making he looks like just a rich useless husband. He didn't even give a d*mn about his wife reputation in public. He should do better without anyone telling though. The wife also start meddling with the company all of a sudden. I don't really like this.
Chapter 80 of Manhwa starts at around Chapter 205-206
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