Good book. I especially like author notes at the end of chapters. Unfortunately there is one big problem and it's that author often use 'him' on wrong gender same with 'her', which is quite annoying.
Was this book dropped or will it begin releasing chapters again soon? jdjdjdjrjrjrjhehhej
Thrilling and action packed. Very entertaining for those people who wants to have some spice on their boring romance reading life. ? kudos writer. Keep it up.. ?
For now i think this novel is a good one which have the potential to be high ranked like library of heavens path. The writing is good and not annoying .It's kinda I shall seal the heavens ; or the strongest system writing in more lighter .For now in 16 chapter the story is still good and complete. The main character is serious and a good boy who not abandon his moral values .There is not harem and the story go at a good speed.
Keep continue this story bruh, that suuuuupeeeerr interesting. Can't wait for another part. It's a nice storyJdjjdhdndmsbgsgshdbdjjdkdkdhdh hdjdjdjdbbdhdbdjdjdkdjjsjdjdnsvgaksl
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Potential starter with great story buiiding.. I enjoy the way story describe character and i have a fun to look with a family play together..And you know what.. Spoiler alert.. Joker.. What a nice class.. That was wonderful idea.. And with skill of card dice and token.. You really like to gamble man.. Good luck with the plot armor.. Im in, so go forth sailing with your tales...
Okay so. I'm only in the first few chapters but I have to say: this is really so disappointing. I've heard that the grammar and stuff gets fixed later on but how the hell does that help the early chapters?Those chapters really need to be edited and gone over by someone so it doesn't drive off all the new people who are attempting to read this novel seriously.The fact that you've made this novel into a premium where we require the use of Ss's or fast passes to read is just a freaking disgrace. If you would go back and edit your starting chapters maybe then you'll be able to retain a decent amount of people.From looking through all of the grammatical errors and mistakes, the story actually looks interesting and something I'd enjoy. So, I'll continue reading on and try to push until the edits start showing up. But yeah, I recommend you get your stuff together and fix your older chapters or at least get rid of your premium so that we don't have to pay to read a story with mistakes. Thank you for taking the time to read my review.
My friend, the fates are cruelThere are no dreams, no honor remainsThe arrow has left the bow of the goddessMy soul, corrupted by vengeanceHath endured torment, to find the end of the journeyIn my own salvationAnd your eternal slumberLegend shall speakOf sacrifice at world's endThe wind sails over the water's surfaceQuietly, but surely
Well from what I have read this novel keeps you in the dark most of the time. And I swear the Mc has multiple personalities from the way he acts. He mercies an opponent in an arena and in the exact next paragraph he says that that he will not give mercy as it’s a death game, and again after he says that he tells the opponent to give up. The way the author implements humour is excruciating, he would be threatening someone and the next second he’s getting smacked in the head like a comedy skit. The story progresses pretty fast and the world building lacks considerably compared to it creating situations where a person would be introduced as the relative of your arch enemy, but we don’t know who that arch enemy is. The switch in moods makes it so readers have a hard time imagining the mood and frankly it irritates me. We are not even given the technology level of the world and what we have to do is put bits and pieces together to make up one. there are too many times things just don’t add up, and in the end contradicts eachother.
This book is a breath of fresh air for Webnovel I hope it gets the recognition it deserves very soon.???????????????????
This is a very good novel it takes a twist on the normal vrmmo novels with it being set in a underworld type of game! Personally I feel like it is very interesting because of the game mechanics and how the race against time is ****** him make un-normal decisions to make money.