I really liked how author has set up the conflicts within this novel whether it be the little conflict of him Celine or him wanting to live a normal life against all odds, it sparks interest and curiosity which makes me want to read it further.The comedic undertone and unique setting is also hilarious. Kudos to the author.
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Well, the story itself is very good. It has all the plot in the background, the plot is great, the characters are good and in short is a great story to read!
The heck! The synopsis and the story is conflict! In the story, MC is playing games with his phone and gaining skills, while the synopsis is telling that the MC is gaining skills by means of extraction!?
Ok so I hate NTR with a bloody passion but and I havent read it at all but the fact that you decided to make this story for others who love to be cucked and enjoy NTR is a wonderful thing yes there are a lot of people that Hate NTR including me but im not going to ask you to stop keep up the good work imma give you 5 stars for encouragement and to keep writing.
Keep it up, I need more, more more ......................................... .................................................. 140 sucks...................................................................
Excelente, pero se puede perfecionar, el diseño de los personajes, el fondo, la historia, los detalles, todo est bien, pero hay momentos en donde en mi caso se cambian las palabras, solo itenta penar en los que usan traductor.
It's a very detailed story when it comes to describing the buildings and systems? There seems to be a bit of a lull in the middle around Chapter 25 but starts to pick up at the last few chapters (Author probably intended to stretch out the story? Or it might be due to how much energy went into descriptions). Regardless, it isn't a bad read and I'd be curious to see what happens next now that it's starting to pick up the pace. Don't wanna be left hanging like this T-T Fanning Knight and Fiery Blade Sage are definitely the best characters hahaha. MC is such a troll but at least he's somewhat self-aware?
I was curious because it has so many votes with power stones....WHAT A WASTE OF TIME!I regret reading as much as I did. I thought maybe it will get better since it has so good votes... NO!! Don't make the same mistake! Bad translation, bad characters, bad world building.... It's just bad. Read something else!DISAPPOINTING!!
Honeslty I like the concept but the mc's senior brother who is the sect leader flat out ruins the novel for me. Such an incredibly forced character. To say he's bad at pill refining is an understatement but the author has created him as a character who childishly and stubbornly refuses to accept that fact, and instead of actual effort/development, it becomes a meme that trashes the novel. The sheer obliviousness to his own failure makes it an absolute joke.
I made an account just to post this review and that's saying something.It started good until the author started forcibly filling up the story with identity politics and lbgtq alphabet bs. I'm stopping here at chapter 187. I was here to read about a story of an old man who spends his retirement inside a video game not to read about identity politics, Twitter is already filled with that bs
Take this out from trial read and release it for further reading.This is a good story. Hopefully you will continue translating itKeep it up just like the others