Nice as ice friend I like it very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very much if you keep working with a story like this don’t give up even when it is hard I can guarantee your story will flourish
Update the story please. This series is awesome although I have watched anime but I want to read this novel and this is not completed yet meanwhile anime is going to end this season please update it????
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After reading the first 15 chapters it is becoming more and more painful to read this sloppy machine translated novel with minimal editing I hope that the quality will improve in the future but I see that as unlikely.
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good novel but too many unnecessary info dump, It's really annoying just a casual skill will have 2 to 3 paragraphs of introduction plus it's historical background from the cultivation world.
Currently ongoing with over 180 chapters. The MC has so far shown normal level IQ with above average determination. The cheat is interesting in that it has lots of potential, but it's all up to the MC to figure out. Overall, the best series this week without a doubt and a solid C+ to B within the site. My only complain so far is translation. Specifically, the quality of the card after transformation.
to start love the story and mc i love the fact that he has naivety and if it wasn't for those fake sisters it would be better. second the writing is all over even in the 100s small spelling mistakes are made sometimes you have trouble even reading a sentence. third why did you put him close to such people their still making the same mistake all over again if ryuu wasnt so naive I think he would have left already or at the very least kept their relationship at a professional level.third at times you just skip out on parts to go to a future date then sometimes you will highlight parts that's not so important while making other parts that could be important seem small. fourth you started off with a heavenly dao child but then it seemed you didn't like that so you both slowed his cultivation and skipped over his whole training. fifth this book is great just missing a lot to get to awesome. maybe I'll come back one day to finish reading it.
I am an avid reader I mean staying up till 4 am falling into the story plots and characters. Yet again this site screws us over by stopping another good book!! I’m tired of spending good money just to get screwed again and again if this happens again I’m dropping this app and filing complaints!! You want out money but take away our books!! Kiss my bum and everyone else’s!!
The synopsis and tags all seem pretty generic. It’s been so long since Webnovel published a book with an interesting premise. I don’t see anything unique or worth reading yet. Maybe I’ll check back in a few months
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Here is my honest review!First is the translation quality: It's average, but the word choice is quite good. I enjoy reading it. It's good even if it's average.Stability of Updates: Don't know yet. This novel is still in trial read. We will probably get 14 chapters/week if this novel gets picked. Story development: The story is unique even if it's a system genre. I can't comment on that. I can't call it cliché either. The pacing of the story is good. Not slow and not too rushed. Not too much attention on details and you will have a sense of progression as you read the chapters. There are unexpected moments and you can look forward to what will happen in the future chapters. This is talented level.Character Design: Characters with personality. I like it. We also have character details. I know how the characters look. The author gave me just enough details. Very well balanced. The MC is interesting. He's badass, cool and a good looking scum. His personality is charismatic. You can't find another one like him. World Background: It's a modern world with cultivators and beasts. Yes, it's a very used world, but that's okay. This type of world suits this type of story so I don't have a problem. It's not a detailed world either. World Background is probably the weakest aspect of this novel. As I said, the novel doesn't focus much on details, especially not on world details. My evaluation: A super balanced story with very good characters. The author doesn't dwell much on details, but we get a story with a good flow. The biggest strength of this novel is the MC and the natural flow. A good balance between comedy and seriousness. Let's hope that the quality will stay the same even after the novel gets picked. Most of the readers will like this story. I can guarantee it. Not everyone though.I hope this review helped you understand a few things about this novel.Honestly, I feel like it's one of the best magical realism I've ever read on trial. I'm a fan of these types of novels.