DaemonSultan
Quite well written although there is a ton of relationship drama, nothing unfixable and it's not extended needlessly so that's good. No ntr and harem is small but we'll done.
Really good, im happy.many new novels arrived. Uh please check THE AMBER SWORD, retranslate or whatsoever so it will come here. Because its current TL inconsistent, he said hiatus 1week then became 1month without notice. Also suddenly he greatly reduce the quantity chapters became 6/month and maybe less because he is unhappy about 1 person critics that affect his mood. Wtf. Then his decision affects all of us reader, he said blame the person who made critics. Oh my...
A woman’s gentle and pleasantly surprised voice drifted into his ears.
By the way everywan some dude asked if the demon king dragon master trains
His heated breath splashed onto her while his warm lips were pressing onto hers and his tongue was forcing its way into her, teasing and turning…
Chu Feng one of the best Demon Gourmet Killer in this world. Any divine beast will be his food except the shark. That made him experience the mysterious energy line called Karma!
As of Chapter 110Writing Quality: 5/5Little to no mistakes. I will not say that there are no mistakes as i might have missed them. However, i have not spotted any mistakes thus far.Story Development: 4/5The story development is great but nothing extraordinary. My only issue with this story was him attaining the ear rings at the beginning as it felt relatively plot armourish to me. Besides that the development is interesting. The first arc was relatively bland in my own opinion though (dungeon arc). However, the current school arc is great. The introduction of new characters who have this sense of mystery around them is interesting. Character Design: 4/5The MC is a goblin based character that can evolve. This is nothing new among light and web novels. The character has a grimdark vibe which I personally like. The fact that the MC cannot remember much of his past life allows the author to cover alot of potential plot holes which was a great and simple idea. The side characters have are interesting as well as you can tell that there is a story behind each and everyone of them. I personally cannot wait to see their backgrounds.Updating Stability: 5/5If i could i would gibe this a 10 out of 5. Daily updates.World Background: 4/5Pretty cliche litrpg vibe. Magic and monsters. World wise, the area in which the MC has gone to are only 3 locations so far. However this novel is pretty new so there is alot of potential to expand.Overall: 4.4I will say that this is one of the better novels on this application. The main thing this story is lacking a something unique. This story is relatively cliche and nothing about it stands out compared to most other novels. However, despite it being cliche, the author still wrote the story very well. The best thing about this novel so far are the mysteriousness of the side characters. The side characters alone have enough impact that a novel can be written for them (biggest difference compared to other novels). For this i give props to the author. I would even go to say that this novel has one of the best side characters so far. I hope this story contunues and will continue to support this novel.
Very cool premise, mc is intelligent and knows common sense. And of-course, the no-harem tag is great :>EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
this was an underatted novel, wow I loved the concept and writing style, looking for more chapters ??
Vampires Coffin is a must read story for all. The author has taken time to plot this story and the character settings is amazing. I just wish the story continues...
OMG, I really didn't see it coming. Wow, the plot is truly amazing, its a really mesmerizing style of writing and the dialogues...<3Loved it, pls keep the issues on a regular basis!
The story is good, pacing is too, power up good, still no waifu material to be found, not too fast paced haha there is even a reference anyway all is good except for the update stability not good but its still doable its just that waiting a story this good hurts especially in a good chapter i recommend yall read this......
