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If you create a MC that will make full use of a system, and show us his status, you better keep the scores consistent. And since you don't care to correct yourself, either for your MC status or your many grammar / orthography mistakes, then I will go back to other titles.Those are sometimes a bit more negatively minded, but at least they don't drive me nuts with major inconsistencies.
I guess it's a fine novel. That remind me a lot Full Metal Panic that I watched years ago when i was still a kiddo. Some kind of comedy/slice of life/misunderstang/romance. Even though, i didn't read a lot (40 chapters) i think i mostly saw everything than can be shown and in the genre that seem quite easy to guess what will happen/will happen not. A good read to relieve you from some boredom.But I will quickly end my read on it for a single big reason. It's premium since chapter 85, they're more than 200+ chapters. That's way too early, i barely got 20-25 gemstone per day (if i don't forget to check). Not adding the fact, it's not some kind of addictive novel, you read it, you can creep a smile time to time but that's all. That's also why the novel is falling in the ranking again and again the more chapters is going on. I can't check if the quality is going down but i don't think so. Think that's simply because it's a premium original with a lot of chapters and the story isn't addictive enough to throw all your wealth into it. They will be some fun joke and funny moments but you can found these moments in others stuffs without having to sacrifice your read on your favorites novels who are more unique.Wishing still good luck to the author, i think that if he's writing that novel just for his own pleasure. That's perfect. If he's writing it to get a living on it, that's going to be a bit more difficult.
The worse racist novel ever... But good story.. As an Indonesian chapter 530 is the worse Chinese novel chapter I've ever read..MC got overpowered throughout the story.. (till 531)I don't know the later development tho..
well first of all writing is pretty good the author should spell check the earlier chapter because they have some grammatical errors. which don't happen in the latter ones. The writing style is a little weird and takes some getting used to.then the story is an emotional rollercoaster I advise to read in burst. honestly the start made it so I couldn't really enjoy the laters one without taking a pause to cool off. honestly I quite hatted the start the ntr really was to much to be honest. I have no Idea why is stuck through that. especially when it happend twice.the character are somewhat weird but it gets somewhat explained why they are that way. though it doesn't really fix everything.world background is well mostly non existent there are some chapters here and there which gives some bits id info.and well as of writing he is still active.
This dude watched all the anime and cultivation bullshit and copied all that. Trash mc for 24 chapters after getting all the power still wasting time in a underground city or something being an f rank hunter.Mc says he is not going to spare anyone he will be ruthless but don't kill any humans of course when he is not in af mood or some shit.Author made mc as pathetic as he could so people can feel sympathy or something for him but whole story is about how pathetic he is.
I hate Killerbee for not finishing this masterpiece. It’s really sad hoop. Whre ever he is I hope he is okay and well. But it’s still a sad truth that this masterpiece won’t be finished so it’s better to not read it then to read a unfinished story because it hade so much potential. 5/5 in rating but you should not read it.
Notice To New Readers! My first few chapters' writing quality is quite bad and can be said to lack creativity, as I was still a newbie at the time, but gets much better as the novel progresses!I can't say my writing quality is the best now, but compared to when I started, it's much better. I know my story isn't the best on the site but there are at least some things to like about it! Hope you stick around!Also, there will be No Harem on this book. The MC will have a single partner and no more than that. Thanks for reading this review, and I hope you stick around with the book to the end.
I abolutely love this novel. Entertaining, fun and has infinite potential. No plotholes whatsoever, no annoying inconsistency. Original ideas(as much as it's possible) and loveable characters with actual personality. The collegues, family members are not just props but feel geniune humans. I give this novel my full aproval and spirit stones from now on
With all these bad reviews before the novel was even translated is causing this novel to be buried and not allowing more readers to see its colors.This novel is another OP reincarnation type novel. However, the MC wasn’t the strongest in terms of fighting in his past life, but was a renowned alchemist. He was lucky to have found a supreme cultivation technique that required him to die physically and live in spirit form for 1000 years(?) to comprehend a layer.Overall this novel is a good read; the character building of the main character(s) is sufficient to enough so the readers aren’t lost on whose actually relevant in the novel and not elaborating too much on the side(small) characters. A lot of novels here make this mistake of elaborating too much on side characters that end up being forgotten as the novel goes through different arcs.Bear in mind that the MC will always be OP since he has a lot of knowledge in his past life which in turn becomes a sort of plot armor for him. However this is also due to the fact that he also found an OP cultivation technique thus increasing his fighting prowess and potential in this new life of his.There’s enough here for readers to gain interest and have an enjoyable read. For those of you lacking in stones, add this novel so you can read it while collecting more. Cheers!
reading up to chapter 19 , it felt like the story is a description of an anime episodes .—————————————————————————————————————————————————-
