SupremeKaz
Hello, my lovely novelist, I like all your stories.Please help me to publish more stories, I am always waiting to read ?
Omg paul is so sick ! I hope she get away this time ! What a manipulative sick person !! Thanks for the 2 updates xx
I don’t like it.
Arghhhh... Fifth's story pleaseeee
I love this book so far.
108 chapters 9-16-23
Very sweet story. Loved every chapter.
I liked it at first but the FL is making poor and weird decisions. I really don't understand her mindset. Also, she and Xavier act like besties and then like strangers. And she seems oblivious of his feelings which are pretty obvious. She's annoying me...
this book is great! even from the first chapter, I was glued.
I'm going on chapter 25 and basically every chapter is redundant. the author wrote 4 pages of Aurora's tattoos and piercing. Like really, do we really want to spend our time reading about tattoos? I'm deciding on whether I want to continue.
I got pulled in at the idea of the book. It has a lot of promise. The writing could use an editor desperately. And then... we know how time works, and then is in the book an excessive amount. Writing style is much like my kid's was in 7th grade. Good idea, but needs refinement in it's execution.
Love this book
