You should upload some info about the world also you are writing only story about how the character is growing but you should add some part where we can know about the world our main character lives in
I actually read this when it was on kindle imagine my surprise when I see it here.It’s always nice to see a ntr story so 5 stars for that and I genuinely like the writing and characters hope to see more and don’t listen to the hate, people can like what they want (unless it’s illegal) so take my stones cause I forget to use them
First review of mine and unsee what to write down so I’ll speak my mind about the story. Great story so far with interesting characters, going at a good pace. The only thing that I feel somewhat lacking might be the world/story of the game they are playing on and how it feels weird that the demon emperor is not like a last boss, instead is a constant antagonist trying to stop players. When he is a ‘emperor’. With this their actions seem similar to team rocket and their constant harassment to Ash. But in this instance succeeding and destroying the player base. However over all the story is really good and would recommend and the past of the MC is really interesting and would be interesting how it will affect more of the story. Furthermore maybe also include some past of the other FMLs and allow it to integrate into the story, that might make it more enriched.
The story is progressing very nice but I just hope to see improvements in the writing style in some parts of the scenes .And if someone is deciding to read this story then you chose the right thing to do.
"A Pact With the Infernal Sovereign of the Underworld" throws Lucius Devlin into a heart-wrenching quest for revenge after a brutal loss. This exciting novel explores the depths of grief and the Faustian bargain Lucius makes to achieve his goal. Packed with action and intrigue, the story will leave you wondering what price Lucius is truly willing to pay for vengeance. Overall a great read!
this is an amazing book the author is great. I love how he's started and has continued to move the story along, while giving time and effort to the char development along with world building. The best part is how amazing the author has been able to wave this all in at the same time.
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Damn good show, this story has kept me busy nonstop for 2 1/2 days. I have barely been able to use the bathroom while reading this, so entertaining was it.There are several times in this story that I expect(dread) it is going to slow down, but the story has kept a steady simmer of plot and power development through its entirety.I have been massively entertained, and I look forward to more.
i have read till ch. 20. good story but It doesnt entertain me. i'll try the mage cultivator. no hard feelings Just personal taste...........
It has nothing to do with the synopsis lol …………………………………………………..
5 star for the title. Too bad this is not getting attention. The heck a bicycle goes to cultivation world. DAMN! that is so COOL!!! Keep it u author-san. Lets see where this goes.
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