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This book is unique in its right. What I admire the most is the eccentric writing which I noticed since its in stark contrast to mine.Writing Quality: Its great. I find myself able to follow the story and even the more specialised terminology well because its presented quite well.Character Design: I sorta feel that it's lacking a bit, not in the sense of development but purely design. I'm heavily biased towards visualising my characters and I feel like I don't get enough of that.Story Development: it kinda stunted for him in some of the chapters, but then went back to a great flow. Overall its good.World Background: As far as I've read is great and keeps building up with the mechanics as well.Overall great story that I recommend to readers.
Such a great novel, the mc is calm and not hot blooded, and not to eash and pushover.Please update more. More. More. More. More. More.Thanks for your amazing work.
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IT'S FINALLY HERE!!!! THANK YOU VAIN!!!! I was going to check if you were going to put more of your stories here but before I could check SH I checked here first and I was not disappointed. Now time to see mc join the dark side. YES BECOME AN ALMIGHTY BEING THAT IS A TRAP!
I just read this in comrademao, why do this and steal someone's work. Are you really that desperate...I just read this in comrademao, why do this and steal someone's work. Are you really that desperate...I just read this in comrademao, why do this and steal someone's work. Are you really that desperate...I just read this in comrademao, why do this and steal someone's work. Are you really that desperate...
I am not really good at writing reviews so please bear with me.This story is slow-paced but for me it's good because it shows different influences of different views to a child that stubbornly holds on the beliefs instilled into him by his companions as a growing child. On how he deal with the obstacles and what does he firmly believe in. In their world, decisions are important but it should also align with his beliefs as it may cause repercussions to his foundation.He is extremely decisive and that's what I like about Hei. If he resolve to do something, he will do his best to accomplish it.I wish that the author can continue writing more exciting chapters. ???? Thank you!!!???
Sorry but not to my liking. Why does most novel makes the mc stupid , which ruins the novel, even through they have high potential “System”. The mc is always weirdly stupider than normal person in novels with system. And mc in this novel was supposed to be a smart hacker that cheated in every way, but after he was transported to another world he became stupid. Those kind of novels can only progress by “The Lucky Hand Of Author” which will get obvious as the story goes on so it’s better if you make the mc smart to have many other ways to progress the story. For example he is so stupid to even try to find out about the world. Also he has the ability to create any skill but has not done that and I know that’d be OP but that’s the author’s fault for making it too OP. My suggestion in this kind of novels would be to make the system OP but the mc would have to work for those benefits. You should be able to guess what I’m talking about and if the system is OP without having to do any work than the only way to balance that would be to make the mc overly stupid which will literally ruin the story. At first it may seem like a comedy but that’s gonna be get boring very soon. This was an easy fix at the beginning but it’ll be very hard later on but still hope that you at least try to fix little by little as the story goes on.
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Ok, so I read up to chapter three before I found a major plothole and dropped the book. The details are in chapter 3 paragraph 15 where I left a lengthy paragraph comment regarding the plothole. It's a shame because the translation was quite good. Not near perfect or anything but still quite good. But I think that the lack of common sense overpowers the good translation and world setting. But if the author can improve on that then the novels in the future might actually be quite good. BTW, author, don't try to save this novel. I said future novels for a reason. This is beyond saving.
This is a novel with a good premise, but that's not rare. The author does his best and he made some good plots but as usual people like me mainly remember the negatives lol.Anyways the MC's ability is good, though I don't understand why it's named unlimited growth, and he does his best to use his ability properly. Unfortunately the MC is limited by the author. The MC is focused on getting stronger and doesn't bother showing off, but the author still tries to get in that whole audience commentator thing from time to time. The one thing that was just completely dumb is that some big countries (Like the eagle country) were willing to surrender without even fighting again the aliens. Now I'm from South Africa and I'm not a fan of USA, just saying they wouldn't surrender without a fight. Anyways the MC's ability is quite good and he always gets stronger in some ways by fighting. The class he chose, while I was disappointed at first, was ridiculously OP after author showed what it could do.Now the things I felt the author didn't think of. Now the MC can get an attribute depending on the type of monster which is good and when the MC gets it to 100% is not the problem. The thing I seriously dislike is how when the MC is collecting these attributes by killing monsters it literally has zero effect until it reaches 100%. That makes no sense. He collect Sword talent and it did nothing until it was all collected. Then later on he got a strength talent from Lionman and it didn't effect strength up until he got the Titan physique at 100%. Anyways just those gripes. But overall it was quite good and I definitely hope it gets chosen since it's a Faloo novel. I would have continued reading the raws but stopped at chapter 46 since the locked chapter starts around chapter 49.