Amazing, well written novel. Its one of the hidden gems out there. Mysterious, powerful but balanced MC from what I gathered in the 4 chapters. But its still early stages as we still dont know much about the world or the MC himself. But so far, so good and defo worth reading.
excellent work, keepit up, excellent thriller story.
Very good story so far. Mc isn't a wuss or a pushover and at least he has the ambition to become something like a lord. I hate mc that do not want to become 'king' but somehow still become and then they b*tch around how they didn't wish for this.
gbt has a wide range and a few other options to be able and the most important thing is the ability of the doom of a game of a big t and lois is the most powerful player reborn Chapter
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Noooo... Sorry I cannot stay those dialogues. I get flashbacks from trashy japanese isekais... It's traumatizing... I get it... This MC probably escaped fro mental asylum... It would be best if he was mute though. World - 2 stars. (typical S&M) Story development - 1 star. (We get guy running around and copying skills.)Writing quality - 1 start( Maybe after you fix those dialogues... It will go up to 2 stars) Character design - 1 star( Those characters are 1-dimensional... while MC is completely weirdo...)Stability of updates - 2 stars( What this number doing in this section though... It should be rated only after story being released for some time. )
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Great novel the only problem is i finished reading and waiting for update thanks for the novel and thanks for the exp????(great novel)(great novel)(great novel)(great novel)(great novel)(great novel)(great novel)(great novel)
the story seems to be interesting but lot grammar mistakes. i understand English is not native language but when you publish a work you should put out good quality. would recommend for everyone to give a read and ecide for themselves
Fantasy with Video game, and system, and little bit sci-fi? I can't imagine how wonderful is it. I hope you can do a magic regarding to your plotline
This story is extremely good at throwing you into a fantastical Fantasy world. Really thrilling for those who like to be emersed, the world-building, magic system and characters are all spot on!
A surprisingly good read. I do hope that it gets released soon. I cannot wait to know what happens next. I hope that it will not disappoint. Hehehe