The world of Nocturnia is so cool. I would like to know more and what is her "telepathic" that mean. Overall i like the energy and there is some awkward dialogue but i love the pace!
I am always a fan of idol themed story every since I read debut and die. I thought that it is the story of that theme but boy, I was wrong. This is an exciting story of that is taking a different spin from other showbiz novel. I love the energy of Jun Hao and I love how poetic the songs are. It gets better that it is an original composed by the Author herself! Totally deserved that five-star rating!
absolutely amazing splendid though would like to recommend faster updates
The story itself and the plot is interesting.There is a lack of character development and there’s no point in putting in highiq tag if he’s gonna rely on the system for solving all cases.I’m satisfied with the overall story but just the character himself I’m concern about.
I just read this story an hour ago and I can tell this is top-tier writing. I found little to no grammar errors. The characters are fresh and unique, the world building is different from the usual cultivation novels (starts in a desert, layers of lore and mingling of food, culture). The story arcs are satisfying, imo the author should get more power stones. He seems to post daily so that's also a plus point.I really liked the part where Hu Shuo gets drunk, this story is a gem!
Was an interesting idea that's ruined by the authors 1 inability to keep a consistent logical timeline, 2 cool loot that is nerfed or disappears from the story entirely shortly after it was introduced, and 3 poorly written fights. Though other than those the story IS well written.
It's pretty good. The cheat is like the mix between "Am I a God?" and some basic tamer novel. Totally want it to get picked..................
I wanted to give this book a try after seeing it do so well in ratings, and if you have chosen to do the same, and end up sticking with it, all the more power to you.I for one just count get past the first few paragraphs of this novel with the fact that he is 18 shoehorned in, as well as other small fact, hammered in again and again, the same words used to describe just used to death.Maybe the writing skills of the author improve, after all, it is just the first chapter. But the fact that they have felt 0 need to make any changes with how poorly it reads doesn't give me any hope for the future, or any want to continue.I wish the the author the best of luck, they seemed to have cultivated a good following with their book, and I'm sure that their ideas have fleshed out nicely after being able to give the time to it, but as it stands now, in what I assume to be it's unedited state, I cannot continue with it.
Don't write. You're talking about a select minority of people, but everyone is a jerk.Do you want humanity to lose its lineage, its past history, its culture?
Very excited about this novel. I hope it gets pick for a trial and turns into a novel.Personally, it think the twist seems cool and it not the usual video game or wuxia style that copied and pasted.
That has got to be the laziest title ever , it's Made even worse when you read the synopsis it's like he's not even trying I get the trend of writing the same genre but if all you did was read "the most generous master" and think, "I can do that too" , paraphrased some stuff added some stuff then passed it off as yours, then you like most others are a failure of a writer, for the record I haven't even started reading, and I don't think I will, still I'll give you a 3 just because, I'm pretty sure if I actually read it I'll give you a 1, hoping you see it as a 0
Too fast paced …. i don’t know what chapter the raws have reached but i could see this novel quickly running out of steam and getting dropped.