WisWaifu21
hi! I love the plot and the story. the synopsis was good and I like the flow of the story. keep up the good work and be a writer in the future. jiayouu!!
It's only the first chapter and the character development is solid. We get background on Kayden as the MC, reasons to root for him, and of course the mystery.Well, there are parts that feel a bit long-winded in explaining something, but that doesn't detract from my enjoyment of reading this novel.
I really like the story, despite being a genre already used with some regularity, it's different and original at the same time, because it doesn't portray a transmigration or reincarnation.I hope the author develops the story further so we can get addicted to it.
Your story is nice. The Building of it is nice. I hope the author can continue his work more and make his dream successful. I again say, the story is good. May the stars align for him.
At first it was interesting, mc having the highest cultivation level in his plane/realm all to know that he have no combat experience at all which sucks.The plot is boring with alot of flaws.
Frankly my disappointment, the beginning was good, the virus system became as if it did not exist, controlling the will of humans, simply a farce, this is how you make harems and friends, hehehehehehe where is the evil here?!? You take disciples and servants the same whether you control them or make them friends, the usual Chinese approach
overall it is a good Story. but the chapters are too expensive.
Awesome novel. The beginning is awful, but if you persist to at least chapter 23, then you would be captivated by this novel. The only unfortunate thing is that it is clear that this novel would get better as more chapters are released, so it won't be satisfying to read early on with few chapters released. The premise of the story is that MC would get the ability to have a life simulation and for the first two free simulation it would be realistic that MC won't have a great outcome since he's just beginning to learn the rules. The MC would be given a summary in the third free simulation that wouldn't have a good outcome, but the good thing is that it's not final. If MC decides to synch with the simulation he would have the chance to change the outcome for better or worse. I'm not saying this novel is the best, but it is definitely a recommended read and would hopefully pass the trial phase and have more chapters released.
Hahahahaha I hope that you won't drop this novel I will try it...............................................................................................................................................................................
good story, future headache for other city lords. He's going to steal them all with his pets..... waiting for more chapters..............................
Great, just don't drop it. OKMake mc eviler.Selfish, strong........pragmatic, no moral, no humanityA person who does things for his own interest without care for the world and the people.
VR GAME novel with harem is one of my favorite and this novel gives be the same vibe as shura's wrath and evil dragon against the heaven.i am enjoying so far and very excited to read more chapters .
