It's interesting, to say the least, with interesting ideas and concepts.
From what I've seen, it's just your average novel. Definitely not worth reading but still read it if you have nothing better to do. Like always QI, instead of completing your novels on hiatus i.e Dark King... Yall just bringing out crap smh
Well, you need to improve the settings and such describe with 5 senses avoid to direct storytelling put feelings make the MC react :D also keep writing it improves the more you go so I await the further publishment
This review is not a short little sentence giving five stars and saying a single sentence which is I liked it, nor is this a short review giving 3 stars say that it's not good and I expect better latter on. This is a real review giving genuine criticism something only a human can do not just some recycled line from a comment bot.The writing is good simply put it's good your writing level is already near-professional I haven't spotted any typos or major grammatical errors most of your sentence flow well and have no issues with them.Though your chapters are very sporadic and random, I'd recommend that if you write more than you need in a day you should stockpile. Them and wait a day or a few hours before reposting so it gets as much exposure on the updated list as possible so more people can see it. That way your schedule would be more organized afterward, and you would be able to get more views.The main content for this is mostly religious text but the way that it's communicated is mostly through the author's personal anecdotes which is what makes the story worth reading. Just religious text and content may make a book but it probably wouldn't be good the bible already exists what's the need to rehash it. The anecdotes in this story are good usually, anecdotes don't just stem from how interesting your life is but the context and what your willing to share. This story is pretty transparent you can see the reflection of the author in it which is what makes it good. You need reliability and humanity in a book and that's what makes it interesting what lets the reader sympathize and learn.I'm not religious and I'm not interested in becoming religious I was an Athesist turned agnostic. I'm not going to lie I scoffed at parts in the story because it doesn't fit in with my ideologies. But I read it anyway so I'm going to share a personal anecdote.When I was in school, Elementary or Preschool I can't quite remember I was talking to this kid he was talking about God and I told him I didn't believe in God he told me I was a sinner and he would never talk to me again, and he convinced a few other kids not to talk to me either I was pretty upset at the time, but after a few days I pretty much forgot about it I had my own friend group at the time and wasn't really affected. But after a month he came up to me and said he was sorry, he was in the wrong and he accepted that and apologized. Although I was young at the time I accepted it and moved on. The point of that is it doesn't matter if your religious or not all people are human beings and deserve as much respect if someone is an Atheist and in the wrong, they should apologize, same with Christians or any other religion, we're all people so don't go out of your way to antagonize people for their religion. You think you're just trying to persuade them into dropping their religion but you don't notice what it does to them afterward.As for whether or not this really belongs on Webnovel who can say it's not something that you would conventionally see on this website. But as for if it belongs or not that's up to you author.
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Well, this is a promising book and I would say keep up the good work.I haven't actually read sci-fi on a complete balance, but this, is one good start.well-done author, wish you well.?️
Overall amazing concept and unique on this app but the update times plus word count is bad because just a thousand words every week it kind of a short chapter so I would recommend adding some"fluff" like more detailed description of the MC or other characters because all I know about the mc is it has 4 legs and is red.
Mr. author, this is not a review but just a fleeting idea I have and decided to write it here before I forget...So I was reading the novel when I suddenly thought if what kind of drama could happen if the MC married an icy girl for political reasons and they both dislike each other extremely for some reason and can not just accept each other as lovers but they both respect what they families needs and accept the other as their wife/husband and so the relationship is cold but they respect each other duties as wife and husband.like they will not allow some stranger to disrespect the other but will not go and praise each other, they may do their duty in bad and pleasure each other but the atmosphere will be freezing, instead of staring at each other with warmth and love they will only look indifferent and dislike... so the idea is how can they end liking each other and how many extreme situations needed to achieve that.What do you think?
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I tried to give it a chance despite the bad reviews since the concept looks great and it was the author's first novel. Sadly the story was suck despite the great concept the author had. There are too many questionable decision made by MC that against common sense of what people should've done. MC only pick 2 skills out of 5 free chances then rushed out to hunt. I mean sure there are people who like to be careful before picked out what path they want to take, if you know you want to go out to hunt of course you would take 1 of the weapon skill and the detection skil, but wtf happened in your brain if you didnt learn the Ai skill when you know nothing about the new world ? Its funny how MC immediately got angry when opening the chest bcs he assumed it was only the strength potion without checking it out first, when MC literally only know like 1% of the new world, instead of checking out what it was MC instead assumed based on his little knowledge. Even if the author introduced the MC as a pampered son for the MC forgot to turn off his hidden stats doesnt make sense unless he is dumb. You clearly already told that any lucky encounter would cost you the luck stat, and it would only regen 1 per 2 weeks, how the **** you forgot to turn it off as if it wasn't important enough to remember. I stop reading right after a random girl showed up and tried to kill the MC but ended up becoming his woman, like who t f think that it was natural ?
I really think that above all this story illustrates a desire to be accepted when it should strive to set a precedent but overall I do think it’s an excellent book and I look forward to reading it all