So this novel is still progressing great I look so much forward to it dude... your work is absolute. Thanks again please give out more chapters.
I really love reading the story for the author and translator vividly presented ideas and concepts that have enrich and enlighten my imagination into realities and unrealities in this world of skills and competition..... more stories like this KUDOS to author and translators
To me its a story filled with comedy and a tint of Yandere and more like the MC is likable and funny even with his funny quotes and he seemed to be like the plot armour and also he seemed pretty high spec and so on Btw I really want it to update PLS UPDATE!!!!
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first of all you seams new writer. it’s ok keep writing you will Learn more. about story development It's like other Chinese cultivation novel but you add some extra about haven that other novel don’t say. you didn’t say much about main character design how he looks now. update is main factor keep it up update Daily. Don't make world like main character go from one realm to another It's boring. make something different. keep learning and keep this novel as long as you write You'll Learn. your idea is so keep it up.
great start .....!, no comedy element yet .. have to see .. hope he gets harder options in future.. harem come on .. more monster girls n...
The main reason I love this novel so much is mainly the premise and the fact the demon lord and hero recarnated together near each other and also the jokes get me sometimes and lastly I really enjoy the characters and how the story is going so a 5/5 for me personally.
Actually guys... give this novel a chance , we all know that before , the synopsis is pretty short and it's not that convincing but at least now they tried to fix their mistake and made it better and more convincing , so let's just give them a chance to grow and vote for them , to tell you the truth actually , when the first time i read the synopsis ( before it got changed ) i wasn't interested and i know you guys aswell but then when the synopsis got changed i started voting for it sometimes , so lets just give them a chance okay? You wont lose anything for a few votes and you even got +5 spirit stones XD....
interesting background. dialogue could use some work. Characters are too innocent. Showing mercy once is fine, the second time they shouldn't leave unscathed.
I love it!!!! I don't are about grammar it's amazing!!!!! They're so cute!!!? Argh 8 want a system!!!!? Fabulous, brillaint, fantastic. J'adore le book parce que c'est bien bien bien bien. Well done author!!!? You're so awesome!!!!
Why do people seem to like this? I can't find anything interesting or special about this novel.Avarage writing, avarage World building. You can see the story development from miles away and the MC is a total idiot.Non of this makes sense.The MC Master is one of the worst offenders, she is literally the most useless thing in this novel.The Demon sect is petty thieves sect with strict morals.The Cultivation systems are stupidly complicated and serve no purpose. An immortal is literally weaker than a mortal in mind and fortitude.Even the most sheltered snail can gain a little wisdom after living for 30 years, the cultivators in this novel can not.This novel is meant to be funny, it isn't.It is meant to be exciting, it isn't.It is meant to be surprising full of plot twists, IT IS NOT.The MC is an hypocrite, dumb as a door and a waste of space and opportunity.
Alright, I must say that this book is a piece of art! I don't know why it doesn't have a review yet but here is your 5-star, I can say that this book has great potential. The idea about the slimes in the tutorial ground is interesting, I find it enjoyable to read when the MC fought them. I'm wondering when can I meet them again so as to see how will the MC deal with those slimes especially when they had gotten much stronger after they respawned.Speaking of the MC's abilities, it also caught my interest really well. I'm itching to know how will he use these abilities to fight his enemies. But as of now, the MC seemed like he is yet to try it out as he can only use the world's mana. I will watch the MC how will he learn to use those abilities and achieve strength far greater than anyone else. Thank you author for this wonderful story. I hope you have good luck and have peace of mind to maintain writing such a good story.