Sithaari
The Hero looked like he was about to retort, but before he can do so I cleared my throat. Everyone instantly turned their attention to me.
Everyone was shocked becouse of the response of the king shaman, even Ning'er did not know what to say about that, she just stared at him, a little embarrassed becouse of him saying it in front of everyone but was also happy.
"Ah Zhe, if you are truly embarrassed by this, let's move away from the city. We can sell everything that we have here and start a new life somewhere. How's that?" The elder of the two starts to compromise.
Where have I heard this?
He rubbed his temples even as he roared in anger, standing up and slamming one hand on his metal desk.
"Bro… brother…!" Uriel's voice echoed and Raziel slowly looked at him with his now mismatched eyes. "Brother…?" Uriel called him again.
The student's hands flailed around hitting the teacher's arms to try and get him to release him however the damage was so negligible that it felt as if a fly was landing on his skin. Realising that his hits weren't working, the student then pulled his leg beack and quickly kicked the teacher in the family jewels.
"M-My dad is... my dad is dead!"
Yin Mei paused, seeming to consider it. The other students didn't say anything, seemingly agreeing with Ri Yang. As for Qin Shuang and Song Hua, they were simply waiting and watching to see her decision.
It's strange we are allowed to review a novel that has no chapters posted. Well, I will review the cover and the synopsis. The cover, crude as it is, made me think it's about football, but the cover in the raws are completely diferent, the typical fantasy chinese novel cover. The synopsis is surprisingly more usefull than the usual chinese novel summary and made me suspect it's a commedy. They should at least post the first chapter of the novels in this "what's next" section.
So twenty chapters in and this book is pretty good! I actually was planning to review after 10 chapters but the book sucked me forcibly. I like your character design its fun and creative, this is a nice spin to the system theme. Because there are so many different elements the story can be confusing at times or rather the system itself, but the read is still enjoyable. And you've got major momentum on the book I need to learn from your ways haha. Looking forward to reading more, you've made a fan out of me!
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