So twenty chapters in and this book is pretty good! I actually was planning to review after 10 chapters but the book sucked me forcibly. I like your character design its fun and creative, this is a nice spin to the system theme. Because there are so many different elements the story can be confusing at times or rather the system itself, but the read is still enjoyable. And you've got major momentum on the book I need to learn from your ways haha. Looking forward to reading more, you've made a fan out of me!
