I can't wait for the next chapter. ???????????????????????????????????????????????. More please
Please Post More (: the novel that you wrote is one of the best that I have ever read online. So keep going, talent shouldn't just vanish. As for the viewers be sure to read this novel.
What you have so far is absolutely amazing. I cant find any fault besides the names which are hard to remember. THE story is emersive but not in your face that your filled and overwhelmed with to much information. The side charachter loki juno is actually funn and has personality. It's good so far plus it's actually a book I like and don't want to role my eyes at how stupid the plot is. Definitely don't drop this.
Awesome story and a well done MC just add some dramatic scenes and also make sure that at least a war arc or somthing with Russia and it will be the best story continue the awesome novel ?????I the lion sin of pride declare this novel as my number 1 ☝️☝️☝️☝️
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It is pretty good,not that bad at all. Just wish you would update more. Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice!
For pokemon lover, this novel is really enjoyable to read, especially when the MC started collecting pet beast. The MC is quite ***** and stupid, he made mistakes here and there but i think thats his charm, in fact im glad that he's not some typical crazy OP faceslapping and arrogant MC like most system based novel has. And he's still 15! Still a green boy, so there r rooms for improvement. It's still early to judge this novel but so far its interesting read.So...keep up the good work Dear Author~**. My dear author, its only my personal wish but please please please don't make this a stupid romance harem novel with dense MC and stupid arrogant vixen wives, instead i suggest to make it like those shonen type books, and focused on friendship and adventure, with limited to none romance and smart heroine (if any). And i hope u add interesting side characters (preferably male lol) who has their own unique personalities and not just MC's cannon fodder/stepping stone. Ok that's all....and this is just my suggestion, and in the end everything is up to u, Dear Author. You don't have to listen to what i wrote here hehe, just u creating this story is enough after all... And im thankful for that. I wish you luck~
Even if you admit this is not your work doesn't mean its ok to steal someone translation without crediting it. Do you even have their permission? This is like you admitting you steal someone work and yet still stealing it without feeling guilty.
Worth a read and hopes it gets picked! Similiar to “The world online” but also different in its own ways. There are a few problems or annoying things in the story but overall they are easy to set aside to enjoy the story and character, especially if you like the premise of this type of story like i do.
All hail Scrappy the best and only god in the kingdoms. I need more Scrappy and I neep Scrappy to reconnect with John again before the war starts
The premise and novel systems are really eye-catching. This really seems like it has potential to break the mold. But for the love of my life, the grammar and the abstract wording used here are life-draining. Author, please edit your chapters from the beginning or pay someone to do so. You can hire mw if you want. The only good thing I can say about the writing is that it is at most understandable. Too bad, the plot is nice.
This is an amazing book!! I enjoy the growth of the MC both as a person and as a fighter. The writing it well done with few errors. All in all a great book to add to your library