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I love the character. He is cunning, logical and perfectly reflects his past. This is an underappreciated work and i think that this should be continued. I do not understand why this was dropped.
i dont know how these authors with barely presentable novels dare to make their novels premium after 4 free chapters it d be a little bit understandable if ur novel was outstanding and using a never before seen idea but this one is trash why tf do u think people would read it after 4 chapters
I like the story and for once an actual kind hearted Chinese MC However, the translation quality is terrible Please get a competent editor
not gonna lie the character designs are really nice because I can imagine the characters quite easily. The chapters are constantly updated every day as well. there has been quit some development but I feel like with the current rate at which main character is developing he will reach the top of humanity in about 200 chapter so I wonder if you have any other new plots like fights in space and stuff and the main character being able to destroy planets. the character development I feel like the main character went through some progress in his cold behavior. I am not sure about the world building so I put a 4 stars. Overall a very nice light novel and you should read it
Found another hidden gem ! This novel deserve my spirit stones ! Oh i'm so happy with myself ^^140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass 140 characters my ass
I like the story, like the directions its going but i would love to get more release per day . Would be waiting for more updates thanks for the story !
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writing quality is at the level of your average native English speaker so no complaints. especially since that's so hard to find in cultivation novels. the story is pretty good while it's not the most complicated it was almost always engaging to read.the characters are written at the level of a published book so better than most webnovels. (SPOILERS my only complaint really when it came to characters is that after the mc reaches stage one it felt like he became a new character which didn't feel as good to read about)there is about twelve consecutive hours worth of reading in this novel.the world background is the same cultivation world as in other novels but more well thought out.I'd say it's worth the time reading if evil MC's are your cup of tea.
so far its nice the MC not getting anything from the system without money. so mc must work to gain money to exchange for system point. no free lunch or easy present for the MC (for now) except the cultivation strength of disciple don't know what will happen at more. chapter but, until this chapter the mc need to gain money to exchange with system point to buy things for the sect. kinda like top up system but more harsh to mc
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT????????????????????? BUT BRO, THE GRAMMAR ERRORS ARE IN THE WAY~
super. awesome adrindi, add some mystery remember
One of the best books on this platform for potential. Please pick this up, it could turn out to be something really great. The pacing is just right and there have been no cliches so far. The author actually does a great job at breaking those old tropes. 10/10 for potential.
