So I kind of liked it at the beginning, like the first 5 chapters because I felt the mc was cautious and would develop well. Then, the power he gains is poorly developed, and by power, I don't mean the dragon powers. I mean the system, it had serious potential, but the way it is designed leads to werid and unable to be understood power, and the way he gains exp is simple but bad in the grand scheme of things only allowing slow growth. plus, nothing is explained at all. How much power do you gain when activating your dragon power? oh, I don't know, a lot, I think.. oh then, how much speed do you gain when you put points into agility? oh, I don't know, but now I'm faster than a human. OK, how fast is a normal human in this fantasy setting, then? oh, I don't know. listen, I know that humans, on average, are around the 20 to 25 mph mark, but this doesn't have to be true in his world. as an example, the elf guy prince is so fast that it's hard to see him move. Next is the world in the first 40 chapters isn't flushed out, all you get to know is that there is 2 worlds and on the human side they have a wall and a palace and on the elf side there is fantasy land with a elf palace and other races.next is the Mc doesn't have a reason to do anything. He says he has a family but can't see them. he saves the elves for no reason. he trusts 3 randos just because and fights for humanity with blind faith for no reason, never even questions humanity even when shown evidence. I get that he is human and has been fighting for 5 years, but the people behind the wall and the people defending are different and have a sorta mistrust between them. it could have shown that Mc isn't blinded and is just cautious if he had doubts about the inside of the wall. if for a moment he didn't trust the upper echelon of the military and stayed awake because of it. all of these points are from 1ch to 35ch. Now, the story has potential for growth, but I must drop this because I won't pay for a maybe. I wish that the author continues to write but adds more info and really describes the abilities and how they affect the Mc more.
OMG! I love your book dear author! I love the story of the moon and the sun. I feel sad about it though lols. It was a great story. Please update frequently and hope you release a lot of chapters instead of just 1. ? Overall, I really like it!
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In the start, the story is very interesting. Although there times when his ex throws the whole story line, the action part, ecchi scenes are well planned and written. Our main character who is a 16 year old teenager, his mentality, his behavior, his actions, his personality is like a 20 year old or more. This makes the story even more amazing. The MC does opposite of what I thought he would do.
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