please do not make a new romance with a ***** person who never deviates!I love your novel, some passage are funnybut make evolve your mc, especially a child of 7 years, it is curious and learns quickly, you can also make him undergo misunderstanding, as you evolve for my part I think it will add a soul to your novel.
This novel reads more as a slow day by day than an action adventure with slow pacing through roughly 100 chapters, the protagonist is defined as very ordinary and lacks any clear development so far, the worldbuilding is interesting but the protagonist is lacking meaningful strength, talent, wisdom or standing to make any story impact other than being fortunate. The romance is good enough though it seems his potential partners will lack in presence as they will be away for the majority of the time. Good but unfulfilling.
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I love this story!!! When I was trying to find some BL Light Novel to read, and I come across this... I thought that the cover art was beautiful so I check it out, but somehow I ended up reading it and it was... GREAT!!!I don't see much BL scenes in it but the plot was wonderful! I love it!!!
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Just read it. Give the series a chance. I read the mtl for it. 5/5...
i hope this one gets selectedmuch better than the trash novels which are getting selectedwe want something like thisi hope the MC also enjoys the life later on
I dropped this novel before and i was bored and found it again and decided to give it another try but I just couldn’t...First of all you meet someone and ask the person to join without explaining to detail what you want him to do and he just agrees and then you go ahead and give everything to him for free and he asks no questions whatsoever and just went ahead with it...Secondly you meet a girl who is older than you and she gave you her number and hit on you , ok I understand the fact that because it’s your first time you would want to go on a date with her but to ask her to marry you on your first date when you are only 17 WTF who does that and there are far more beautiful girls out there and also you no nothing about this girl...This novel just seems like it’s the authors wet dream and how he wants his life to be so he just write everything down without thinking that it wouldn’t be him reading the novel and also you put the restricted pa but all i see is a na*ve kind hearted boy who is an id*ot....
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From what other reviewers are saying this novel my kind of novel by so called “ shameless authors “ ?? so haven’t read it yet but like every novel I picked to read after checking out what others have to say. This novel gonna be a wild ride of shamelessness which is much needed. It’s not a habit of mine but with how stuff is now. A little bit of shameless reading is good for one and looks like author delivers on it. ????
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Very nice story, interesting cast and most awesome world building i have seen in a long time. Very solid novel, very intriguing plot. Would recommend.