Betek
love the story......................love the story......................love the story......................love the story......................love the story......................love the story......................love the story......................
Poetic, beautiful and moving. This book has everything going for it and more. I love it and I'm sure any fan of fantasy will as well. The vocabulary is vast and the writing quality is consistent.
While it's not my usual cup of tea, I liked the characters and the set up. I liked the world-building as well. In particular I liked the ML's and FL's interaction. While slightly clichéd, it's a good cliché. I approve.Now just waiting on the author for more chapters.
Al can l is that I hope the writer do esn’t change the stor.y
?? Have not figured out where this is going but it a waste of time to read. I waited to the third chapter to give this review.But the 2 and 3 chapter are mess. I had to go back to look a the 1st chapter to see what I was reading.To read this is to forget it. Don’t waste your time now.
I was looking at what other books my favorite authors had done when I found this. It’s a good book so far, it just needs to be updated again after the author regains interest in it, which I hope happens soon. I really wast the details on suspicious hacker dude, cat girl sex, and that one bike dude amongst other things...
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Mano me fazer ler isso foi obra do INIMIGO! Como uma historia tão perfeita não foi pra frente. Meu deus do Céu, como o mundo é injusto! Esta sem duvidas entraria no meu top 3 melhores Fanfics da Marvel.
Not bad, not good but just blandThe gorilla gimmick is not utilized and instead we get a human in a gorilla's bodyThink of planet of the apes then remove whatever was good about it and you get this novelThe author can't decide between human or gorilla and the mc becomes another imitation of a monster protagonistThere is no direction to the story (plot is nonexistent) and the filler chapters ruin immersionWorst of all the entire premise becomes wasted due to indecisive writingP.S - If you have read any novel like this one then you have read 99% of the monster protagonist novels (or at least they pretend to be monsters)
Low rated Gem, the system might be not too forgiving in terms of strength increase but it's gooood if you think that everyone else are martial artistsfew issues though, why does he not put points in the cultivation manual itself, wouldn't that boost his cultivation?
this author Nikaido. He is one of outstanding webnovel authors with good skill in scene describing. you probably enchanted with his scenes describing. For this book I want to know something. There are too much married women in harem?I don’t like that kind of woman. They’re not deserved for Mc’s holy rod. And there were too much other men’s stains and clues in their holes and on their bodies. after Mc pierce their holes and then he use his rod with other harem’s members that can make other women dirty with other men’s stains and clues.
Absolutely no background. Instantly thrown into a new world. There was no point in even referencing his old life, then in one chapter he becomes extremely overpowered. There isn’t any buildup, you just get thrown in to unexplained overpowered.
