any update?
Good book to read
I've tried to continue reading this novel until the end, but I found myself gradually disliking it for various reasons. The only redeeming feature was the intriguing concept of visiting the future and bringing it back to the present. However, the author diminishes its significance, using it merely as a convenient device to explain how the main character, Lu Sheng, becomes so powerful, without delving into the intricacies of this unusual ability or exploring the future world in any depth.
After the first hundred or so chapters, the novel begins to exhibit the common flaws of many Chinese novels. The writing often seems aimed at padding the word count, with most chapters filled with unnecessary content that adds little to the story, making it feel repetitive. For instance, it’s not uncommon for an entire chapter to focus solely on describing the MC’s impressive entrance into a venue, embellishing it with verbose and nonsensical flourishes, and detailing how the awestruck audience reacts, further emphasizing how cool he is.
The romance in the novel is a complete disaster. Despite heavy hints suggesting a harem from the future biography mentioning multiple wives and several potential love interests appearing throughout the story, the author ultimately ruins it by forcing a rather awkward and contrived love story. It reads as if a third-grader was tasked with writing a romance. The relationship lacks substance, with no real foreshadowing or foundation for the romance to develop. The interactions between the characters are minimal, akin to those of acquaintances in the same workplace. In fact, he has spent more time with other girls than with the supposed heroine.
Lastly, the main character himself is a significant issue. In this novel, Lu Sheng evolves into a typical arrogant young master with extreme narcissism. The narrative consistently portrays everything he does as right and justified. He beats up anyone who disagrees with him, with no consideration for caution or consequences. The author repeatedly asserts that he is not a bad person but a normal one who does both good and bad things, yet his actions suggest otherwise. The author also feels the need to constantly emphasize how cool, handsome, and perfect the MC is, which comes across as self-indulgent and unrealistic.
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Okay, so this could have been a 4-star. The story really has potential. It’s just that in the middle, there’s some unnecessary romantic drama that keeps repeating over and over...
**Spoiler**
The male lead (ML) deserves someone better. He was psychologically abused again and again, sigh... At least, in the end, the cycle was broken.
The main character (MC) wasn’t my favorite, and the other characters were just meh. Not really memorable, which is sad because it started off pretty well.
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This novel perfectly met my expectations with its focus on the main couple, often referred to as "dog food." I appreciated how the reasons for their relationship dynamics changed in each arc, but found the plot somewhat repetitive. Despite this, I took brief breaks between arcs, making it an enjoyable read for me.
The main character is adorable and genuinely adores the love interest, which makes him more than willing to fulfill the ML's desires. The ML, on the other hand, displays a possessive and obsessive nature, yet he deeply cares for the MC, ensuring not to harm him and seeking his consent first.
The story primarily revolves around romance, leaving side characters relatively underdeveloped. The supporting system plays a minimal role in the narrative, contributing little to the overall plot. The tone is simple, gentle, and heartwarming, but it also touches upon themes of mental health, particularly in the ancient arc (Arc 3), which was quite emotional. The tragic loss of the ML's family and his longing for his parents' presence and protection were portrayed in a poignant manner, bringing tears to my eyes.
Idk if it was worth it to wait for the translation or just read the mtl
The latest chapters already feel like mtl
The name of things keep changing
ngl this looks like my kind of sh*t from tags though rating makes it sus
Here I am For another yandere harem sol
high hopes after I killed academy player
Will report you fllas soon
Pls add more chapter ? I love this novel
What do u think if there is a hole there is a goal
old comment, regardless he was never naive to begin with. That tag doesn't belong on this novel.
Can a novel with a shitstem even be good?
Thank you ?