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nice story, liked the world building, i do not normally write a review but i think this book needs more attention, so here I am :Dkeep the good work up and hopefully your book will find the hands to more people
This novel is sensational, anyone who likes The Innkeeper will love this one too because it's similar
I read a lot of slow pace story, idiot MCs, and those who want to be so called "low-key"this is definitely up there, the MC is one of those genuine idiot who want to "follow the flow" and becoming "low-key" so he doesn't really want strength that much, hench 60 chapters and only in the second qi.The story is repetitive in term of flow, and it's extremely boring. Sure there's a comedy tag on it maybe that's why the characters is idiotic, but i fail to find the comedy in this.
the author of COBI (Castle of the Black Iron) and Silver Overlord has a strong patriotism when it comes to his country (based on the 2 previous novel that i read of his) so expect the Hua (china) is a great country / the most powerful nation / powerful soldier and advance technology thingy. His novel is catered more on Chinese rather than international readers but if you liked COBI and Silver Overlord this will be probably also appeal to you
I'm here to tell you that I am not a fan of the most popular connection for this. Needless to say, more exposure would be a great way to get the best start.
How is this a romance novel? MC visits a prositute in like immediately the next chapter. Give me my time back. Give me my time back. Give me my time back. Give me my time back.
This is indeed a dark romance. I feel sadness and anxiety towards Renee. I hope everything will be fine with her. There are a lot of chapters ahead and this gives me hope that everything will be all right. And if talking about style and grammar, then I can tell that this novel is really well written. Characters and their personalities are also well developed. In general, this story is worth of attention.
Finally a writer who appreciates Haki. All the majority of anime and One Piece genres do not appreciate Haki and do not give him value. Finally someone who appreciates Haki, but in addition, I felt that it was a bad idea if he was a hero of the race of Solomon If he was a Saiyan hero, it would be a good idea, or a better idea, to add Nen from the Hunter X Hunter anime.
would be a 5 star but has harem tag .
I expect a good story out of this one. At the very least, the characters must not be ****** idiots who do nothing but spout out arrogant words, while looking down on the MC only to get face-slapped or killed by MC later on. Frankly speaking, I am fed up with all those repetitions. I don't know why there are so many fans for these kind of 'idiotic' cultivations novels. Perhaps most of their readers are just underaged kids or adults with childish minds? All they expect from the story is how the op MC will cultivate, kill, face-slap, cultivate more, kill more, face-slap more... In other words, Zero character development, Bird-brained side characters, and Enemies with mental defects.
A partir del capítulo 99 es otra historia, por qué parece la versión Mtl de una novela china , no sé entiende para nada. Tan bien que iba la historia que ni se cómo va entrar esto. A menos que sean capitulos de relleno o se halla equivocado el autor con respeto a la subida cap confundiendo su novela con el archivo del mel que tiene .
