Let's make the first actual review. The story is extremely repetitive and cliche. It's almost identical to countless others cultivation stories. You have the ex-girlfriend betraying him with an arrogant young master, he's treated like trash by everyone, well, you get where this is going... It's not entirely bad, though. Author seems not to be an *******, he might develop this novel in a better way in the upcoming chapters.
I must say that normally I'm not into thriller or detective's stories. Yet, the author caught my attention from first; the title, them by the synopsis... And of course the story itself. The suspense in this book is just breathtaking. I highly recommend this book! And I'll surely keep on reading it! Good job author✨?
I am enjoying reading this book so far till now hope to enjoy reading this book in future also and all the best to you dear author always write such an amazing updates
Woah. That's a surprisingly good plot and story start.Looking forward to the rest.I would advise that you focus a bit in sentence construction, that will increase the whole story by a level because that is the only con I saw.
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