It hast a good beginning i like the Abyss thing but everything else ist just frustrating too read.
https://***.novelupdates.com/series/a-war-between-spies/Genres:Action, Adventure, Slice Of Life, ChineseAuthor: Accommodating Water's Will, 如水意Status in language of origin: 702 chapters (ongoing)Translator: TNTG, JohnSmith369Editor: Alteringviews, ShadowWriter
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This is just world trigger but wayyyyyyy worse What a let down!!!! Such a ripoff!!!!Its one things to take a concept and turn it around but its another thing to take an original work and slap it with a new skin then call It original Thats just plain plagiarism
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Translation Quality - is good, easy to read and understandStability of updates - is good, fast and will keep you wanting moreStory Development - is pretty ok, but too slow for my tasteCharacter Design - is good, has nothing that stands out as good or bad to me thoughWorld Background - is also good, im in it for the ride cause im already interested by what is revealed right now...this is a pretty good novel, at the start you will feel that theres no stakes involved and later find out that there is, story pacing seems slow to me so that contributes to that.mc aint someone with super intellect or some op skill he brings to the game. just an average dude that is lucky enough to discover some hidden mechanics in his chosen class.... he is somewhat of a harem protagonist when it comes to acquaintances as a lot seems to be pretty women which qualify this to a harem tag.someone commented that the plot armor is strong in this one, as events seems to happen near the mc that will benefit him in someways..... like, what else do you expect? its about an average guy that gets lucky and uses that to improve himself...what? you want to read about a guy slowly grinding mobs to get to the top without **** happening? lucky encounters and events will happen to some random guy right now or in the future somewhere in the world, just get into the mindset that author is writing about a guy that happens to get that lucky chance.also it aint all about luck, the mc is hard working and likeable, theres a reason why he plays the way he does right now while he is also working a full time job, he thinks of the game as a part time job and dont want the game to take too much of his time... but things are happening that are slowly changing that mindset.the way the mechanics of the game are written are very fun to read and also well written, im not proud to say that im too stupid to really delve down and notice the small details, but the author has not let me down yet...what makes it special from the rest of the VRMMORPG novels?nothing really.....but what makes me read it is that it is an average VRMMORPG novel and i like this type of story....its consistent in quality and right now im very much enjoying it
First of: Qidian deletes all low-star reviews, which just goes to show what a dishonest bunch they are. The story in my view, really isn't very good. There are a lot of typos, a lot of careless mistakes. the story is cool in the beginning, but it gets very repetitive and boring fast. It's 1to1 WorldOfWarcraft in book-form.You time is precious don't waste it on painfully mediocre things like this.
this is pure crap he says stuff at the begging that we dont know **** about and by the time he has explained them hehe we wont even remeber what happened in the begining i didnt even bother to read too much please dont upload these crappy novels and start uploading chapters for some worth novels!
Do you want to read a System Story with an MC that learns about the world and develops along with it?Do you want to read an MC that grows along with the author? Then, you came into the right place, just go read the first chapter, already!
I hope to god, lumydee, if there will be consist updates cause I can’t handle it stopping again at chapter 182 or something like that.
not a bad story. but as usual with many stories on Webnovel the editing starts out good and then goes to the dump. first 110 chapters are good quality. Then it starts to degrade fast. missing punctuation, missing captilization for names, incorrect grammar, changing established names, etc. if the quality of the chapters editing had stayed the same I would rate it as 3/5. good to read to pass the time. I give it q star due to the usual drop of good quality to garbage editing.
So far so good! MC is a little dense, the wife isn't much better, but the daughter sounds super cute. Two thumbs ? up! Hope the story continues!