Came from wattpad and you can read all the other chapters from this novel as well going from 200-300 I believe. Very good writing, story, background and all the other things you'd expect in a story! and as well as being not cliché in the slightest is another plus that makes this story awesome!
A story about a young man who's shocked after being diagnosed with stage-three cancer. At the first glance, you might recall the many stories involving that wicked disease which causes the protagonist to lose a love interest, or a dear friend. Of maybe they lament as their wonderful lives were ending sooner than expected.But, guess what? This novel in particular has NOTHING of that. It's so entertaining! And the comedy is just something else!! The jokes by each chapter are genuine, unexpected, and are not repititive.I myself couldn't contain the smile on my face. Normally, I'd read a chapter or two of a novel each day. But, this was so amazing that I finished all the 14 published chapters at once!!The writing is simple and excellently descriptive of the setting and actions. The choice of words also deliver the jokes just right! My only comment is that I personally think there's too much swearing but I'm sure no one actually minds it. But for me, when swears are used at limit, the humor sounds more likable.Alongside the humor, the plot is also very advanced pretty well! I can proudly say that this is an interesting story not just a book of jokes you'd find at any library.I seriously recommend this to anyone who reads for fun. It's very likely to lighten up your mood. Special thanks to the author's efforts!! Good luck and keep up until the end!!
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I normally LOVE criticizing novels! Hell, there was a time I was criticized for being too harsh to the authors due to my critiques!But hell if I don't love this story …A BEAUTIFUL execution of a new premise in a story, no overused reincarnation/transmigration/back-in-time or anything of the sort. A child inheriting his grandfather's empire while having to fight for his rights with his other family members (father, mother, brothers) be it in real life or in a VR game.I normally write reviews either due to disappointment (unfortunately, on this site, this is the most prevalent review one can expect from) or potential of the story (normally due to writing quality being really bad, but its premise being way too great to ignore).Guess what, this story falls under NEITHER.It's got AWESOME characters, world background and story development (at least for now) and stability of updates seems to be on a daily release (again, for now).Writing quality is also really nice; it has nicely split paragraphs and very good sentences' structures. Rich enough vocabulary and grammar is pretty nice.The only critique the author still has to work on (for now) is proper tenses usage. He messes them up from time to time, but it is NOWHERE NEAR the mix-up most other novels on this site have. Unfortunately, due to me being me, that still warrants one less star on `Writing Quality`, making it a total of 4.Other than that? It's 5 star for now! Making the overall rating a 4.8.Cheers.
I have read the RAWs for this one...Not till the end but later on the protagonist becomes OP just by designs of his master.. Practical every thing is handed to him.. while others are struggling to learn basics... beading for every spells in their hand... Protagonist gets all possible spells for every level and job for each level on level up...I wont have problem if he dis some work to get it... but no.. since he got the tester account and was chosen by his teacher.. he is spoon fed 90% for all his ability...Any way don't like this point... there is no innovation.. no struggle.. heck he chose a different line of profession after reincarnation for most of his ability from previous life is not applicable here..
its a certain drop if this novel turns out to be a harem type... why cant the males just choose one female companion? is that so hard? Greed cant be fulfilled until death comes..
Nothing new, nothing different. It's a tried and tested premise, and the execution isn't anything to write home about either. The translation is horrible, and really disrupts the reading experience.
Another excellent Er Gen novel, this one is takes a far different look at cultivation compared to his other novels. Absolutely worth reading, it's a story about a young man traveling on the path to being a berserker, a being both similar to the classic immortals and yet diametrically opposed to everything the immortals stand for. A bit gruesome at times, but still an excellent story.
Maybe I'm wrong, but I'm almost certain that this novel is a plagiarism of the Japanese novel "My Reality is a Romance Game".................................................................
a great book with well defined storyline, finely thought out concept, intricately design characters with individual personalities, solid world building gives off dramatic effects!
If you like short novel, mystery, twisted plot, riddles, basically this one will satisfyingly read. Warning to reader that wanted to read a no brain story though. Most story I understand it once I read. Other I have to read it twice or more. Hopefully this book dont go premium.Thanks to translator and qidian for bring this book
Hey, the title of the book really calls for itself! Might as well give it a try. Realistic Fiction is really the scopes of our real-life happenings. Highly Recommended.