author, please don't stop. it will be extremely evil. this have great potential.
The story is over all nice and my favourite character is i guess you know but i want to told you separately that it's ~~~~larry oh my he is so cool pleased to write and i want more chapters
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hmmm... This is a nicely written, well-thought out world that the author has created here. The way the character interactions go is satisfying and refreshing compared to other similar reincarnation or transmigration stories. It is a good read if u r looking for some magic and isekai action, but since the author is new to writing, I would advice being lenient with some stuff. For the Author: You are doing a good job so far and I hope u keep improving and providing us with attractive chaps
Everything is great but the stabilty of updates is none exsistent. ..................... ................................................................. ..................
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All around a fantastic read, the imagery is amazing, and i found myself laughing throughout. The plot is entangling, and Keeps you coming back for more.
I actually read all of these chapters in one go. that just explains how exciting the story is. Tho I feel sad for the protagonist story wouldn't have started without it?..That aside the work is appealing to me.
English is good. Even if it is not good, it's sufficient. This is my favorite genre, yet, I still stopped reading half way through .First, divide paragraphs. If it's this blocky on PC for me, I could imagine how unbearable it will look to mobile users. It's fine to leave two lines of gap between paragraphs. it looks alright. The story progression is good, keep at it, it will work out well.
The story is pretty average and the plot development contradicts the character psychology and development. Its a SMUT disguised as a retarded MC revenge story.
Just the synopsis is making me wanting to not read it. Since when are gamer specialized in going to real life instant dungeon? What usefullness would being a gamer that play behind a keyboard do to going on a real life dungeon? Typical Chinese novel by a Chinese author that work for the Winnie-the-Pooh country.