so far, the novel is interesting. the MC is kind of annoying, but he's also clever. There isn't really a clear plot, but I'm curious to see where this goes.
This novel was the best one last weak and it still wasn’t picked and now it’s the best one this weak it better be picked..............................
Boss Luo is the best I like him!I uesd to read this from web translated in my country and then I fall in love with this novel, thank you so much translator(s) I like you too!
let's not talk about updating stability..this book was so fun to read, the characters was so well developed to perfection, even though the world backgrounds was faintly mentioned, but still it's becoming clear step by step...the writing quality was good, much better than any other new books... hope this will be complete..??
The way MC talks to his sister gives me the creeps. He's always calling her cupcake and sunshine while smiling at her creepily. He's a transmigrated person yet his obsession with his sister is very unnatural. It's obvious he wants to date his sister but ultimately ends up dating someone else first believing his sister is already 'in the bag'. There was not much of a story to this novel but with the addition of harem the remaining story was destroyed as well.
While the translation team itself is doing great, the story itself has issues. Seems very jerky, no smooth transition from chapter to chapter there is always some sort of short time skip so that the author doesn't have to explain something. While the character was raised on a dangerous planet, he had a father figure for a time and spent time with others in VR but he acts crazed and dangerous when he meets people in real life.It is cool that everyone has a mech but it is never explained why those who aren't in the military nees them.Finally no actual story line the character jumps from plot to plot without completing anything
this is one of those novels where a decent story is ruined by horrible writing quality, inconsistencies and toxic masculinity of the author. The story is about a guy who lives around a 1000 years into the future and humanity has expanded into space, discovered the cultivation of martial arts and expanded into space. The main character, Chu Nan, somehow gets a super analytical ability that allows him to get very precise real time information about his actions and that of his opponents. He uses this ability to become stronger despite being judged to be too old. It is clear that the author barely planned the novel and as a result there is very little preparation for the next step. Add to that that it is not uncommon for some chapters to reveal things about what the mc is doing in previous chapters. For instance Chu Nan gets beaten into a coma and his body is severely injured. The chapter describing how he woke up and how he recovered his body is described over several chapters. During these chapters Chu Nan's parents are never mentioned but several chapters later you discover that he has parents, that they went to visit him when he was in a coma and when he woke up and that he even has a sister. Not only did it take the novel around 150 chapters to even mention that he has parents that are still alive but that he also has a sister (almost as if the author finally realized that Chu Nan also has a family). And there are several similar situations where the author suddenly realized that what he wrote earlier doesn't make sense and than starts to backtrack to fill in the blanks, these are signs of a badly planned storyline and the low quality reparations done to cover this up. The world building is almost as bad as the writing quality. A lot of things that in real life we know how it works are explained in a way that doesn't make sense and are based on a very simplistic view of how the world works. And it's not like they suddenly became part of fantasy and therefor it's logical they don't make sense anymore. For instance the authors understanding of muscle growth is completely wrong but doctors and athletes do know how this works and it is completely different from the explanation in the novel. When you work out you go over the limit of what your muscles can handle and you slightly tear your muscles, this is also called muscle pain and most people know this feeling well bc they experience it the day after, sometimes a few hours, after an intensive workout. The muscle pain goes away because your muscles are repairing themselves and in the proces of repairing themselves they make the muscles stronger, bigger, longer, etc. In other words muscle growth comes when you rest after overusing them. The author is working under the assumption that muscles grow by overusing them and he ignores the influence of rest. There are several similar situations where the author assumes how something works and based the story on that.I also strongly suspect that the author originally planned to write a story with a more traditional Xianxia world building but somehow decided to change his plans. Too many times is a collection of planets referred to as a country and most planets only have one or two big cities. The total population of humans from Earth is around 20 billion but that seems to me far too little given how many planets are under the control of the Earth Federation. In multiple situations I have noticed that the scales at which things happen are in conflict with each other. For instance one of the strongest martial arts techniques in the real world can produce the same kind of power that a person in the novel with a 3rd level overlord body can achieve. I know the author didn't want the difference between normal humans and overlord bodies to be too big but because the author failed to do a proper research he failed in his objective because now the people in the novel that should be stronger than people in real life aren't stronger.The story itself is neither innovative or original but it has potential to be not bad (if the writing quality was better it would have been a good story to fill your time with)
Honestly the best VR novel I have read, and I have read a lot of these. Some key things I’d like to point at that are done well. -The MC uses the knowledge from his reincarnation logicallyOne of the big things that grates on me in other reincarnation novels is the MC not capitalizing on knowing the future markets to make money since it just isn’t logical. This novel on the other hand does a great job. Another great point is how power scaling is done in this novel. Typically novels in this genre will have the MC gaining insane advantages but still having trouble and barley scraping by against a bunch of players. Authors do things like stalling the characters growth or making endless enemies at slightly lower levels, however in this novel the MC faces logical challenges and setbacks. There are no cliche one dimensional characters that just serve to further the word count. The author does a great job making the challenges logical, higher level NPCs, people searching for his location, and a very intricate plot. Probably the best thing about this novel however is the lack of plot holes. I don’t know how the author does it but with a constantly entertaining plot and nothing contradicting 10/10. I will complain however :( the chapters are too short. I’m currently all caught up with privlage chapters at 221 but waiting a week for ~13 chapters and then finishing them in a bit over an hour makes me sad. If you read this review please add a few hundred more words per chapter :) :) :) or maybe even double the length lol :) :)
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I bet the New Year ain't gonna be happy.
cool book, keep it up
The book title got me first, then getting to read the book, I must say, I was intrigued! keep it up Author!