What you have so far is good! The plot is interesting. Love the way you started off with your story.There's a few punctuation mistakes and grammatical errors but your story is still understandable. Keep up the good work!
This book has everything I really like. There is a sci-fi world, supernatural powers which I'm really excited to read more about, and an academy. Very cool to read about. The author really has great work in this. It makes you want to keep reading.
Wow, this is story is so cool. It's like a Dragon ball fan fiction but with original transformations, new characters and loads of other stuff. I love it, CAN'T WAIT!!
Another novel I finished by Sixth-sama! He always write such great stories so you better add them all! So go on now read it, you will not regret it one bit! Umu!
the novel is very good to me but i gotta comment about the really slow updateif you like really overpowered main character this is your right choice(** : i gonna love this if his gonna turn out to be harem novel )
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Leaving a review because why not? ?This is my first book about kingdom building that I have read and I have to be honest—I am amazed as an author as well as to how different and at the same time different it is to write these kinds of stories! It must have been difficult!Anyway...Writing quality: I like how the author wrote the story! You could find less grammar mistakes and I like the creativity put on this when it comes to his writing in his action scenes. It is one thing—to be honest—that I am envious of because action scenes are difficult for me!For the update stability, it is already a given. ? I could see how continuous the efforts of the author to be able to update without stopping! ? Great job—despite the busy schedule! Adulting hits hard! ?For the story development, from the chapters of 90+, I could say that the author has been planning well of the plot. From the number of chapters as of the moment, you could deduce from the pacing that it is just right—not too fast and not too slow, giving the readers ample time to read and at the same time enjoy what the author has to offer. ? I could see surprises are going to be in released in the future!Character design—to be honest, I would have to read more to get a better say of this. But as I could see from the comments of the readers, they are torn between cursing the ML or either glorifying him. For me, I have yet to read more chapters to have a say in this so I would have to comment back on my review to have a better say on this aspect. ?Finally, world background. World background for this kind of story is something difficult in my opinion because you would have to think outside the box. To be honest, I could not pull it off! ? However, for the author to weave this creative world is something unique to his story—which is very amusing on his part! Well done! ?Keep up the good work, MoeJam90! ? Wishing to learn more from you when it comes to writing action scenes! ?
The writing is just marvellous. I can't begin to describe how much emotion is brought out when reading it. The detailing that goes into it is beyond extraordinary. Would definitely recommend it to anyone looking for an intriguing story. That being said, well done author!
Interesting story for the gender, but the system and dungeons, while very good, seem to be all there is to it. Not necessarily a bad thing, but I prefer stories with character depth and actual world building.Dtill, a fun story to pass time.
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