One of the best original novel i have ever read..as a harem lover..i really like the MC care and attention to each of his harem member. I hope he stays that way till the end of the story. And not too many harem member please, 8 is max i think, so you can give more detail to each of the member.
5th chapter and it's already come to the first young master and first face slapping. sigh totally disappointed still will give a further review after reading all the available chapters.
story is well thought out so far. however the grammar is poorly written though it is able to be followed so I think it is a matter of lazy writing rather than lack of ability.
so after reading the first 7 chaps I concluded one thing that is: This novel has lot of potential I'm not going to talk about world background and that boring stuff as the novel had just started But for the first chaps I think that they were great,great writing style action that boils my blood and that makes me want more chaps faster(even thought there is no action at the start read it and you will understand) anyways when I read 50 chaps I will redit this post so that I give you my review (even though nobody care *sadface*).
Okay so let me just say—this chapter had me wheezing. The entire setup is basically a comedy of errors that somehow also works as genuine romantic tension. Jiang Zhaoyue decides she wants to consummate the marriage, which is already a bold move in this setting, and then proceeds to escalate it in the most chaotic way possible. She kisses him, they both fall off the bed, she tries to check his 'injury' (which is clearly not an injury), and then he storms off to the study like a flustered teenager. The plot twist here isn't some big revelation—it's the sheer subversion of expectations. You'd think the male lead would be the dominant one, but every time she makes a move, he's the one losing his composure. The rattan ball scenes earlier also serve as a clever setup—her skill with it establishes her as someone who doesn't fit the delicate noblewoman mold, which makes her boldness on the wedding night feel earned rather than random. And that line where she says 'Since you're unwilling, I won't force you'—mirroring exactly what he told her the day before? Chef's kiss. The author is playing with role reversal on a structural level, not just for laughs but to reframe the entire power dynamic between these two.
Please update more chapters of this book
IDK IDK IDK......... but 1 thing for sure is that the drama is out... Yesss, with 56 or 70 episodes (45 mins/ep). Good luck wasting at least 42 hrs... no. 2 days of your life watching. BTW....it's in chinese. Well, that cleaves out quite a few viewers.....So??? Read this book (>1 yr of your life)
YAY YAY A System Novel........I would love to read this. From the synopsis, it seems to be a good read. Please Vote for it!!Finally, genuine Urban Novel with the system.If it contained Romance I would be a better read.
This book is well worth the read. The plot is steady, and the author keep a the story light even when addressing some dark moments. I think the advancement up to the current chapter, 87, has been fluid and smooth with a couple twists and turns. So far my favorite character is the dwarf.
seems like this author has a habit of starting but not finishing stories. don't waste your time reading something with no end
guess my review didn't get posted last time. in didn't check it too. that day itself I read the first chap. and it's just awesome. the feel you have through words when Alex reaches the forest is just wow.
awesome book. just wish there could have been a different ending.