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it's grade A trash and belongs in a dumpster fire .. .......................................................................................
This book is worth a read. Although the grammar isn't the best and in some cases the choice of words are quite bad. But it isn't that bad that it disrupts the flow of the novel. Giving the author a 5 star to encourage him
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The author provides the magical and technological tools mixed, it is a strategy to hook a wide group of readers. Will the author be creative? He needs to use a lot of tools which will be prioritized and which will be used with absurdly simple descriptions. In the end it will dance according to the readers who first rate this book. Are we reading this frankenstein sewing? Hard to say.
I only trust a comment when it's by lv 9 and above since I sus that many authors create fake webnovel accounts to boost there novel ratings. Hence the many level 1,2 and 3's comments you see
While needing a bit of editing, this is a really good story. The MC falls to a schemer (not so sure he has the culprits right) and has to start all over. Previously, he was the No. 1 player in the massively popular MMORPG, completely maxed and a bit bored and waiting for the new upgrade. Now, due to sponsorship penalties, he has to earn some serious cash while hiding his new player identity (there are petty people out there...). I think it has great potential and can't wait to see what happens next!
@ch100... how should i rate it....I came with a mindset that it will be like a happy-go-lucky story with serious arcs in between... where the MC explore his system's power with fun and quirky moments resulting to him becoming stronger. But its Not!!My low assessment is bcuz of:-The MC has a system that "coincidentally " gives skill that he needs.-the setting of the world is messy enough.. and the back stories of the MC's family adds to d dramaIt could had been a great set-up at the beginning but the author missed the point his/her work's title promised... that is to FARM!
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Really high quality novel. Good writing and grammar and I really like the premise of the novel. I really hope to see more chapters released by the author. Peace and love.
I spent a few days to get to chapter 530, although I always read this fast, this was actually a good story. Although you are flooded with dnd things such as levels and skills in the first part it starts to lessen and starts being like part of the story, basically, it doesn't make you want to skip it. The guy who said this story was bad b/c of information flood. Information flood stops if you read a bit and you will get used to it, and most of the time, most, it won't hurt to skip it. I admire how Soran, the protag, helps his sister at all costs, even planning to fight a god (not spoiler cuz it's literally in the first chapter). This isn't harem, although I have nothing against harems, Soran only has one girl up to chapter 530 and story doesn't forget her. Soran doesn't level up too fast or too slow, the pacing is pretty good. The world building is great, you will get used to the world really fast, and keep learning things after. I see few errors, and every characters personality is at least decent, even some characters that are not even important. The plot leaves you satisfied and happy, but the story doesn't do everything you would expect. Overall, this is just a wonderful story, also this is like first or second review ever on any site, so congrats to this great story!!
Honest review. I actually like the beginning but after that MC becomes puss_y , he doesn't want to change past but he did , he doesn't want to gather too much attention but he did by becoming no. 1 , and he is such a coward that he can fight those bully with background but when he sees player in his class he becomes scared like really they don't even know you avatar and they won't know until you tell them .He is So what's the point of becoming scared , coward
MC is a manager of a Bank that gives and trade basically everything. It does sounds powerful at first, but the way this bank makes business is really disappointing. Contracts are non-binding, it all boils down to whose fist is more powerful. How does that even work? A person borrowed something, became powerful, now he doesn't want to pay. The item is his. So far the MC is just relying on other's integrity, hoping that they would fear him and pay back their dues. So if just one person did not act according to his expectation, he would face a lost and there is nothing he can do about it.According to how these contract things are set up, the MC could actually just take whatever he wants from people who enters the bank, since he is a god when inside. He does not need to adhere to a fair trade or does not even need to pay at all, since nothing is stopping him from cheating. The contracts are useless, the MC did not even think to benefit from this.This is different from TTC, TTC focuses more on the psychology of the costumers and less fighting.This novel is just fighting and the motivation for becoming strong is to collect debts.
