I personally love this book. The storyline and the characters are dope.It's a unique story that I've not seen before.I hope it continues like this. Keep up the good work author.
Might be worth going forward with. Looking forward to read more
Love it, its a great story that really detailed about the world and its surroundings. Its concept is also something I have never read so its new to me.
This is an interesting concept that I hope can rise on this site. I feel like Lance will rise to bigger things as time moves forward. It's okay to be scared of things that happen and he is no different.
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I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
How good is this book?? Well kets just say i read 5 chapters without realizing it! Its that good.The only downside or should I say things you have to get use to is the way the MC is written as idk if its 3rd person or something. But I had to get use to it. Overall great job !
It's been a nice read so far???The author put in the best efforts to make it amazingI'm always rooting for you???It's a nice book, really
The setting is interesting and I enjoy how the author has chosen to implement the MC’s system. The clean and coherent grammer is a breath of fresh air on the site so that is a major plus.
As the writer of the book I will of course give myself a five star review :P. Anyways i hope that you guys enjoy the novel please leave me any constructive criticism or nonconstructive I can take it. Have fun reading my novel and remember i hold all the spoilers he he.
First of all Full support from us and second Don't end this journey of yours Mr Author It's really good to see dedicated people like you and also RI fan ????
I absolutely like your idea of making the MC as a sword. Your way of explanation and storytelling is indeed easy for me to understand it. The grammar in the earlier chapters has some problems, but it seems that the later chapters has good grammar.