Hello author! From what i read so far, I can say that this story is very intriguing. A lot of thought and dedication was put into this novel and i applaud you for such an effort. i look forward to reading more of your work. Good Job!!
somewhat good from the start but later ison in the story, mc will become s7tupid which are the cases of some novel that has overpowered chrcterstics and strng backer in it. he doesn't think about the consequences of his action which is stupid. he always creates problems. if only in the story some of his love ones died and mature that is best.so overallthe story is okay the plot is okay, only mc has iq problem.
Best. Story. Ever. I could not have lived without it. 10/10 would read agin for sure. I would have been dead without this, but now I can live in peace.
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this novel can be said multiply fold genre with little bit common sense, since the object to be clone need his power and it cannot copy living thing. but yeah the development of story is so confuce and to much haste. if you a reader without imajination this book sure can spent your free time, if not, then dont read it
Hey started reading a little while ago and the novel is great so far and I'm really enjoying it. (I don't wright reviews so im bad at them)Anyway, one question does the mc stay as a female or not, or is just a mental state that is male and the rest female.
Writing Quality: The writing quality is phenomenal. The punctuation, spelling, grammar, all are really good and well designed. Next to no errors on the pacing, tone, and adjectives are well written and spread throughout the novel to give a nice variety without scaring the reader off nor boring enough to cause you to lose interest.Updating Stability: Posts daily and each chapter is a nice read that draws you in and leaves you wanting more. Story Development: The background of our MC is ambiguous and mysterious. How he was transported to this world, why he was sent there, and how come he has the system are all a mystery at this time. The plot progresses fast enough that it the story isn’t stagnant but not too fast to the point where you are lost with what is going on. Character Design: You have a wide range of supporting cast to choose from and each are unique and they are believable. The characters seem real and you most certainly will find at least one relatable character which is an amazing feat.The MC is not overpowered to the point where he is invincible, but can be kinda dense at times and this makes him feel relatable. World Design: The world is still very much a mystery but it’s absolutely expansive and the author has an excellent skill with exposition that just draws you in and brings you into the story. Absolutely excellent novel and it well crafted and willing to bet with time it will become one of the best novels on the platform. Don’t sleep on this novel, add it to your library and you will not be disappointed!
Although its currently only a few chapters but the pace and plot revealed in these few chapters are captivating enough leaving us wanting more.
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I have been anticipating a vampire genre novel in this site. And this is the first one I found, hope this won't disappoint me. (Will be deleting this review if it does)
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