Grammar needs to be improved, otherwise it's a decent novel with an actual low key main character.there have been low key mcs before but the moment someone does'nt give them "face" it's over with being low key. i hope this character stays low key even when he gets stronger.writing quality: bad grammar but it is not unreadable.2.5 stars would mean average so I'll give you 2 starsstability of updates: no clue only 3 chapters are out. I'll give you half stars so 3.other things can't be judged with 3 chapters released.Character design: I'll give you 3 stars, until now the characters are pretty generic and except for the mc no other characters were properly introduced, but as i said i'm eager to see a low key mc.
Before I read this novel, I had a house, wife and two kids. These things are gone now, but the novel’s pretty good. 10/10 would recommend if you respire aerobically. (btw, if any of you have seen my wife tell her not to come back)
Nice story bro really liked that horror/suspense those are the key element for the story at least for me it is really awesome I would really like to read next chapter I am waiting for it ?
everything was good. the character describing and world background was great. but for starting it was really full of sadness. it really impressed me that iremembered my bad memories. hope your novel get better ranking.
to be honest the novel is just pure confusing to reading I won't recommend reading it
I really Enjoy your work really like this novel and dual cultivation and spirit cultivation hope your continue to put out content asap just to make my day thanks for continuing to write. this story is great but there i no world background so far.
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Its a good story unfortunately the translation are poor that makes me stop reading it. The translator need a good editor or improve the translation.
Very nice idea in general; the pace may be quiet slow for some people, but it is therefore more realistic. It really differs from other XianXia stories (in a positive way, if you ask me), since it does not have some overpowered kid as MC and you are not thrown into some miserable romance story after the first chapters.
Bad grammar structure making the story hard to follow. But if you push through that horrible mess it’s a decent novel but it could always be better much better.
I usually don't read novels that are less than 500 chapters, but I've been short on good novels to read so I picked this one up and am not disapointed. It's a good read <3
You have a good ability of describing things. I can vividly see the whole scenarios and emotions. Minor mistakes but we have them in almost every work. Keep up the good work.