TheATK
Wow worth reading the book! I would recommend it to all! It is astonishing work, nicely written, and the plot is unique.
Been reading the raws and while i first wrote another review, i do not believe it anymore.Translation/updates - No problems hereStory - Lots of problems here. You can replace the clan with a company and it makes no difference. The tamed beast dont appear in the story often and is only used as transportation (and luck gathering) othen then that they may as well not exist. The mc is way above the rest of the clan in cultivation as such, the clan is of no help in any fight and doesnt really appear.character - At the start the characters are stil a little fleshed out but as the story goes on they all become 2d. They have no thoughts of their own. Everyone is impressed by the mc intellect and planning even tho the reader prob wouldnt be (everyone but mc dumb)World background - There is none... Nothing is really explained or detailed enough, everything is left for you to imagine how it looks like. You get the bare minimum to work with and thats it. (I would personally stil rate it higher to about a 3.5 or 4 simply because i do enjoy reading it but there are a lot of flaws that can anger someone)
this is almost the best book I've ever read just give the book a chance ? I'm currently in the hospital because of almost dying and discovering this book was about the only good part now the nurse is looking at me weird anyway about to get some morphine so ? goodnight
Short: The Story is vast, which makes it pretty expensive to read, but most of the time it is a good read. The Character makes a 180° somewhere in the early 100s Chapter but otherwise is pretty consistent. Lengthy chapters in the 600s chapters to artificially legthen the story.
Writing Quality: The Author is often to forced in his writing, which makes Chapters not that good, but most of the times he gets it done right. After chapter 600 it started to get artificially extended explanations and descriptions. Which serve no real purpose (character or world building)
Stability of Updates: The Author tries to hard to match with the requests of his readers to release chapters fast, this in turn did dimish the quality of his writing as above stated. It might be a lack of Editing, but chapters feel about 30% longer than they should be After ca. The 600s chapter.
Story Development: The story developes on a steady pace, in my sight a bit to slow, espacially After chapter 600, with to many inbetween chapters that serve not much purpose. But this is not my choice, its the authors choice. This makes the story an expansive read tough.
World Background: The World is vast, the author even adds more to it by a method of the System the Maincharacter uses. Is the World fleshed out? not even close, there are still so many Questions about Jin's world and this with 630 chapters into the story.
This story isn't anything special,if anything is very below average! The MC is to much of a "hero
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The first couple of chapters are actually good then it starts getting more confused like at one point they talk about vow and i’ve never even learned what the he did because they going to battle scenes after that it just could’ve been better the potential is there towards the last chapters like 50 at writing this I was just so confused
Is it me or does the cover look life a face? Kind of scared me there.
