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in terms of plot this one is quite unique even with many copy/paste of the same genre, the plant vs zombie the dark fog and the amount of zombie going to your home depends on your exploration is quite good, but the problem is the amount of useless chapter specially when its alice pov its totally useless just like today (enoch news) it was just alice pov thinking and the chapter is tottally skippable
This is literally another version of the Digging novel. The level of writing, the characters and the IQ are all on the same level. The world chat is an absolute dumpster truck filled with 2nd rate subhumans whose IQ must have been below 50. There is no logical explanation to what they say, do or think, all in order to make the MC's below average personality and intelligence seem smart. absolutely horrible, do not read if u value ur 2 braincells like me
Honestly, although better than most of the garbage junk on this site it’s just a TBATE clone. It has the potential to actually be more and interesting but the author forces so many plots just to keep the same storyline as in TBATE. I mean here we have a reborn 18 year old that has never known familial love but runs off first thing to go train with dragons for years leaving his parents to think him dead. He comes back only to leave them after what 2 weeks to become an adventurer at like 7. Yeah okay makes sense for parents to finally get their son back and allow him a 7 year old to go off on adventures. Another thing is the “bind” honestly a terrible name that’s just awkward when magic could’ve worked because as said he came from Eath where magic and mana or essence or elemental anything could’ve worked but no we have bind and binders. Just doesn’t work other than wanting to be different from the otherwise same story TBATE. Early on we get informed that the average age of someone awakening is around 12 and our main character awoke at 3 you’d think this would give him an advantage but no not really everyone and their mother seems to be a 8 year old fully awakened genius that is close to being on par with our 18 year old combat veteran. Another thing I have to point out is the switching between pov’s because it doesn’t add anything to the story other than tooting the MC’s horn and saying how different he is from the other boys and how great he is. There is little to no development for the side characters other than being there to support the mc. But like I said it’s better than most novels on the site and the only reason I’m being harsh is because the author has potential it just makes me mad to see a possibly good novel turn bad because it’s trying to follow another story.
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5 stars for this book. the beginning so far is really promissing. It pulles the reader into the story and i hope that the content in the future lifes up to it. ???
The start of the story is good. The use of grammar is impeccable and the writing flows smoothly. A boy shunned and looked down upon by everyone will now show the world what he is capable of. The skillful writing of the author is sure to deliver this story to us in the most beautiful way! Can't wait to read more!!
too cool mam too cool best primordial book......hats off to you the great author of this magnificent book.....your suck shall thrive on...you have my heartfelt blessings
It's really good. Jus trus me. The beginning might be a tad rough but I've defo seen worse... Hidden gem right here.... Well, it's not all that hidden tbh. All over the leaderboards and stuff. It's still good tho.
Good storyline.But the chapter is to sort.
I have mixed feelings about the writing, I am on ch 9 and I don't think I understand half of everything I read, because although it looks like good grammar it is deceptively bad, it's structured weird and mistakes are in places where if you read out loud its just wrong, I can't gloss over mistakes in writing, I'm not that kind of reader, the dialogue and quips mc says most of the time I have to read 6 times over to make sure I understood what he was saying, but other than that every character I've seen has a distinct personality, the world although not told in much detail, is very big, and things seem to be happening though I don't understand it
Really like the storyline; the way you delivered the story was just awesome. I hope i get to read such beautiful creations by you Ganbari tsudzukeru ~!~Miss sana manalo ka talaga!!!!