I’m not sure how to write a good review, but I’ll try.
So far the story is really good, the worldbiulding that mixes sci-fi and fantasy is well pictured and doesn’t soffucates the reader.
The thing that catches most attention is the description of the places and of the scenery as it makes the reader feel like the story happens in front of him, so with touch and smell and can overall enjoy the action.
The characters depicted are overall well written and interesting in their own way.
The story doesn’t seem to present plotholes that won’t, or can’t, be explained later and overall the atmosphere of the book is immersive.
Though I’m singing lodes of the story there are some problems such as: the massive info jumps in the first chapter. They break the action. But as I already said in the rest of the story I didn’t find any.
Some grammaticals errors that makes the reader feel disoriented and characters that seem to be part of the furniture (in they way that they are there but don’t have much space or importance, like the forniture of a room).
As for the story development a lot happens but I can feel that, at the moment, we’re in the tip of the icerberg of the thing that will happen in the future. So for now not many things are explained and new character will come, maybe some will be given more light, and thus my review can be changed.
I don’t think there is more to say about the story apart from good read if you find it intersting and my review useful.
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Personally like this version of swordman in women's world than the original. It still retains the power of MC from previous world, unlike the other one.
I am the ruler of the heavens and all realms. I came to the earth unintentionally. After seeing the talents of the earth, I felt that the earth has potential. So when I left, I created 500 sets of systems like in the novels you read. , As long as like and reply 1, you can get the supreme system, and you don’t lose money. Don’t wait for the time to regret. So, what are you waiting for?
everything is good so far i have read up to 132 chapters and the writing quality,stability of updates,battle systems and world backgroun were pure gold this is the best novel i have read so far
Doesn’t really make sense. You’re using gender wrong in this context. A second gene of some kind would make more sense.
So far (chapter 19), it’s a good novel. Keep up the good work ?So far (chapter 19), it’s a good novel. Keep up the good work ?
The Author Here. Currently writing this review to deliver news to you guys. I started this work 5 months ago and had dropped it on the second day itself. and then picked it up 3 months ago. My grammar and English were so childish and cringe back then and I believe I have improved a lot recently because of coming in contact with other fabulous writers. The work is undergoing editing. I have been editing my chapters from the beginning itself one by one. People who read the prologue or people who have already survived (?) through the beginning chaps might find a lot of changes in the starting chapters. Because I have edited it all out. Talking about the editing, I am currently only editing for spelling mistakes, but have already rectified the grammar mistakes of the first chapter. So please readers. Give this newbie a chance and read my hard work as much as you can and support me. I cannot do this without you guys. TRUST ME WHEN I SAY THAT I HAVE BEEN IMPROVING. AAAAAAAAAA(Goes Ultra Instinct)
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I find this novel fun to read and entertaining too! Currently read 100 chapters.Good points are the world building which is amazing, the skills and cultivation itself and the position beasts occupy in the world too without being just tiered walking resources. I would criticize the main character though as being too much of an idealist even after all his shtty past, which is kind of weird. He cares too much about world peace and living conditions of people he doesn't know nor should he care about. Imo it would be better if he were just cold and consider only his self gain and the safety of the people arround him.There are some minor spelling mistakes but not too relevant here and there.To sum it up, it is a great novel so if you like the genre you definitely should give it a try!
First something like a disclaimer. The "World Background" is far less than the given 5/5 but the book does not need it.At least at my current chapter it does well.It is one of the very few "different" web novels out there and I like it very much.You could say it is a simple story about a simple man. Or you could say it is a story which is fun to read. Both would be true.Good book (so far)!