Fresh book! Will be updating my review as the story progresses.
This man has writing potential but no motivation. Wish he would publish the next chapter soon.
I should have probably put this as a review for the author's other novel, but since it's been dropped now (rip) I thought it better to multitask and try to promote this new novel somewhat.Anyway, it's good so far. I love how you seriously seem to have taken feedback from your first work and improved your writing; it is much more sleek and nice to read, the story seems to know where it's going, and while the book is far from perfect, I've enjoyed binge-reading it the past day (although do note this could mean i am writing this with some recency bias).Now, why the low(ish) ratings? Well, because I think it's better if I'm fair and actually give feedback as opposed to slapping 5 stars on everything, and giving lower ratings allows easier comparison to see how I actually think the different aspects of the story stack up against each other. Writing quality is 4 stars, so good there. My loose criteria for 5 stars is to impress me in some way. Either teach me a new word, consistently use vivid descriptions, use a couple of semi colons etc. Story development is 3 stars because first of all, it's still early, and secondly, while executed pretty well the story isn't super original so far - not that it has to be in order to be good. Same sort of thing for character design. Average, sometimes unrealistic characters, with no impressive or difficult to portray personalities so far. Updating stability got a 4 because it's still early and as a criterion for a review it makes little sense. World background is 3 cause it's decent so far, but again the story is in its nascent stages, and a bit derived. Show me something new. Doesn't have to be crazy. Even something that isn't new, but not normally seen in this genre; that's how i give a good score for world background.Of course if you have any questions at all or want any more feedback/further explanation (and that goes for others reading this as well as the author) I'd be happy to answer. Good luck, I'm enjoying so far
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To much things ask to do before reading ???
Nice storyline!!........................
i’ve read up to about chapter 90 and it’s been a great read so far i highly recommend it.
absolutely delightful read ! I can't wait to binge this later ♡ adding to my collection for now
"Of course not Doc."
Lilith is an angel created by Light as a friend besides Dark.
AN//Hey guys...the voting button is back but maybe it would be better if you tried to vote don't you? maybe there is a glitch that only works for you?...come on come on try it try it, don't worry your favorite author-sama will never try to take advantage of you guys...*evil laugh in the background*
The bell had finally ranged and I decided to open my eyes so I don't get into trouble but suddenly I hear sniffles. I look up to see that y/n had been crying. Why is she cry? Why is her desk such a mess? I remember she left everything clean before she went to lunch. Books, paper and her pens were destroyed. I wanted to say something but I kept quiet, only watching her put her pen back together. looking forward I see a guy smirking at her. Was it him?