Wow! this is a great book. I found myself fully immersed in this story,I hardly read stories about magic and supernatural beings but this story had me hooked up. Kudos to the writer,I hope you continue your daily update ? ? ? ?
great story and very good to see the development of the protagonist since it is very real for a cultivation story with an interesting premise and development One more question and did you stop with the novel for good or is this temporary hiatus?
Damit I would have voted for this earlier if I knew this was Jiang Ye :(Novel updates description is better "Chang An, capital of Tang, the most powerful empire in the continent. A heaven wrecking massacre shook the city to its core. Amidst the incident, a young boy named Ning Que managed to get away, dug out from a pile of corpses along with a little girl called Sang Sang. Years passed, and since that day the two of them lived together. Together with Sang Sang they both entered the military, with plausible military achievements, they were recommended into the Scholar School, which began their miraculous journey.Who is this boy and what does his future hold?"
I give 1 lol, im giving votes every day for this novel and now this became premium after so many mistakes and futuristic chapters lol and a bucher that is not killing an enemy who wants to claim his life is that reasonable to you?
Great at the beginning. However, the last 10 chapters are not only short and filled with none sense, but translated poorly. Clearly not edited or checked for grammar or coherence. Not worth the read any more, which is disappointing. I really liked the story. Please get someone that actually cares to translate and edit the chapters.
Top notch story, I’ve been following the original story before but this revamped version is just gold! Hoping for more chapters to come, and thank you author for your outstanding work
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In my opinion this is the very best novel on QI and ist doesn't get as much attention as it deserves.The MC is really likeable and the concept is something new and different.There are no cliches and every Arc is nice top read, even if the only thing described is he's daily Life. View More
Hope this continues, really enjoying the novel. The way the authors has written about the bonds that the characters have with each other is really well done. I do wish that the upload was more frequent, but the wait is kinda worth it.
*sneaky*do you guys have the goods?I know you know what I mean...the most addictive drug for readersthe raws, it makes you addicted for the pleasure of reading a whole bookI know I used it before heheI'm waiting for the news boys*sneaky*
This review will be more extensive, mainly because it's a premium novel that will devour a vast amount of resources(ss) to read up. I agree with how the overall rate ended up at 3,5 star.I'll start with general points, the title sounds a tad cheesy for western readers, especially those who had an extensive contact with eastern novels, but fits the book like a glove.The stability(5 stars) and quality(4 stars) of the updates is very good. The world's background(5 stars) is a splendid mix of our modern world and wuxia realms. I am mostly happy and fond of the character designs(3 stars), but this novel couldn't evade escaping the dreadfull, trope archetypes/templates here and there. Much like with Disney, you can tell some bullshits coming mile ahead. The mixing of those templates with more fleshed out characters is done fine, but you'll see many wasted or nastily unnecessary happenings. Hence I've settled for 3 stars. Now, the worst part: Story Development. 2 stars. And there are reasons for such low score, even tho, and mainly because I really like this novel. My main issue with SD is that the story seems to be thorn between leisure-paced slice of life romance with supernatural twist... and an animesque shonen-like brawl. At the beginning, in it's roots, this novel tried to do something pretty rare for wuxia. It was neither slapstick comedy like Cultivation Chat Group, nor something grand and vast in seriousness like Ze Tian Ji. But the more time you spend with the story, the more anomalies you'll see. My personal opinion is that the author got bored and/or impatient, and from time to time they(unsure whether its male or female) stir things up, or spice it up with weird and animesque stuff. It's just my assumption, but that's how it feels to me. I am disappointed with many unnecessary and overblown side-arcs and characters. A great examples of flaws that I'vepointed out would be: rich-boy template asshole at school, rich-boy template rival assholes #1 and #2, how the Lu sisters undeveloped into slapstick episodes or how the Little Carrot was forcibly inserted into the main story. And how patiently developed MC ****** background was turned upside down out of sudden and for no reason. Even with all that said, I still think it is a good read. Whether is it worth your time, money or hard work depends on you, fellow daoist readers. All I hope for this review is it climbing the ladder and appear when people consider whether to give it a try. Yours sincerely, Uncle Oddball.
This story is progressing nicely with all the intriguing developments of Yao Ying and Yao Ling. The two main protagonists’ characters are written well although I find that the author made Yao Ying into a man who’s too fixated on *** and is overly jealous. There’s a time and place for acts of love, yet he’s constantly finding ways to ‘eat tofu’ from his wife. If I’m Yao Ling, I’ll probably be so stressed and upset to be just taken for *** object. I hope that this mission will give the readers more actions and less of Yao Ying’s clumsy attempts to seduce his wife. I often skipped chapters of Yao Ying’s lascivious acts of seducing Yao Ling and move on to the story itself.