Engaging plot with realistic characters. It's really interesting how the author switches between different time backgrounds. Really curious to read the following chapters. Nice work.
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As the author, you have to be confident in your own story.So, let me give you the gist. A young man meets a suspicious old man, who ends up adding him to a chat group connected to various people throughout the whole universe. With this, he hopes to write his and his companions names into history, and to never be forgotten.By the way, this is sci-fi and cultivation, so if you're looking for mechs, mech suits, battleships and all that stuff, you'r in the right place. And if you're looking for cultivation, complete with realms, systems of cultivation and fancy titles, you're also in the right place.Enjoy!
So, first of all, I didn't read everything but two chapters... I'll be honest lol, anyways, those two chapters I read, it was incredible, it was good story in a plot and I love the beginning of the story, it was awfully good! nice advance information. ps. don't worry, I'll read soon!
Gamers are fierce is a spectacular novel! It has a clever and kinda shameless (not too shameless) Mc who has a good moral code. I really like the way he speaks and his interactions with other characters. It’s funny and it has its serious moments. The story is no slouch either and is interesting and captivating in its own way. Give it a try it’s quite a good one, actually this entire batch of trial reads is amazing! We’ve got the greatest secret agent of all time which is a barrel of laughs, What it’s like Being a Vampire which reads kinda like a published novel and this. It’s hard to say which one I want but if one of these gets dropped then it’s quite a big shame. I want all 3 of these to get picked up but I know that’s not possible heck it’s possible that none of these 3 get’s picked but that’s life. Anyway just try this one out and those other two also, you wouldn’t regret it at all.
Decent story. Poor grammar. While the story is engaging, the author seems to have issues with conjugation and keeping consistent with tense usage. For those who may be non-native speakers, or those that can blow past such issues, this is an interesting read. For those who might be grammatically sensitive, this is a bit of a tough read.
The beginning was really interesting. Kudos, my fellow Author. I could hardly find any fault or grammatical typos. It was well edited. I could have gifted this story a power stone but I don't have one. Am loving the way the story is going and about the boy who became a slime and had powers is making me want to become a slime myself. ???????????
A great idea turned into an assortment of poorly written side stories................................ ............................. ............................. ............................. ............................. .............................
Some Minor Spoiler ahead read at ur own curiosity My review of this novel of chapters 1-93- Pros -Neutral protagonist- Becomes strong very fast, and Op of course - has a built different system -Grammar is good, other than some minor mistakes -Stability Of UpdatesGood 5/5Story developmentGood 4/5World backgroundHavent had much world building barley know other the few mentions of how big the world is, or i just must been high through it -cons -Annoying dull side characters Annoying and unnecessary fml, let’s not even talk about her background which is so unnecessary -Not right now but will in a future chapter become human to accompany his Fiance/fml The author plan to add it said in chapter 85 in the last paragraphs - uses too much time sometimes to kill his prey just because he wants some funPersonal enjoyed it until he started building his organization
Ill be honest, THIS IS A GEM PEOPLE, one of the best novels i read in this site and i shall proudly follow. grammar very good, story flows fluently, character development check check check. honestly wish thre were just more chapter, Thank you author for thos and keep it up!
I'm giving this book a five star rating because the author deserves it. Captivating synopsis, intriguing plot and character design. Fascinating story development. A truly amazing book. Great job author. ???