So Advice to all future readers of this, this Book will not be your usual OP protagonist from the start. Its gonna have some deep **** That happens in real life and although i don’t like the MC being pathetic and all,its cHaracter Development and believe me u will enjoy it, tho u have to get used to it and get consoled By the fact that the mc apparently has a big dick but too cowardly to use it. The mc develops some character Later on so expect good shT.
The story is a little unique, as is the title. I was immediately engrossed after reading the first chapter! I was eager to read more, and I couldn't wait to do so. I truly like how you wrote it, and it's a pleasure to read. It's now in my library.?
Awesome nice to read , very interesting story, English good, story plot getting better, no regret reading it, the flow of story is exiting and wanting to keep on reading
Man, let me tell you something man, let me tell you something man! Snoozy is a phenomenal writer! This is his first book so some people didn’t like the beginning by the way he has grown and progressed with his story telling and world building, they way the Ed our MC has developed its simply mind blowing! There is development of the Ed’s character, mentality and ambition; as well as his powers. The research done into other cultures as well with the combination of western and eastern concepts along with the authors own ideas, they form this expertly crafted story! I don’t want to spoil anything but all I can say is our MC has neutral mindset maybe chaotic neutral mean he will help others but he also will see through his goals and ambitions if it means ignoring someone’s plight, using others or putting himself in harms way. Ed is really OP he’s above average at best where we stand but he’s unmatched in his ability to plot and see plans coming to fruition. The best thing you can do is add this to your library and just read it yourself, don’t take my opinion on anything other than stick through the beginning as this was his first work! He has another book as well that people love I haven’t read it yet but I will, even with it being on hiatus and him wanting to rework it, because he is just that good at drawing you In and i would love to see how he developed with that one as well as when he reworks it how he mad it that much better. I guess I kinda review both but he is great and the story is great! You still reading this? Why?! You should be reading the story at this point! Can’t Wait to see you in the comments of the newer chapter leave me reply to my comments and let me know if I got you started lol
One way to describe this novel, quite odd and unique at the same time:I know the beginning is quite shocking especially with the main character suicide, but at the end he got the consequence which is become something like a lifeless doll which. As he become the lifeless doll, he met with three strange girls that had a distinct personality with one another.For me is pretty interesting take on and there is some direction that the author can dig up more with the relationship between the three mysterious girls. The three mysterious girl is itself have their appearance and demeanor very diverse with one another that I can't wait for their development for the future and also the main character too when he interacted with those girlsAs for the flow of the story is quite smooth for me so far, but for the description, I believe the author can give more in next few chapters. Anyway, that's all I have to say about this novel and keep up the good work with weird, story(it's just only my opinion)
its just plain and generic.there is nothing New in story and most imporant thing is if you read top many Novel like me this thing is BORING.
So so good….......... More please .......... ...
Completed 77 chapters This is a great story. I read it in one day. I couldn’t put it down. I look forward to reading book 2.
Amazon blurb! I love the narrative style
Can't believe I paid money for an unfinished story, bad grammar and spelling
best book so far
If Sherry doesn't watch it, John's going to rape her again like he did repeatedly when he locked her up. This man is so selfish! he only thinks of himself & what makes him happy. The only reason he treats Sherry like garbage is because she ran away from him, not because she left their daughter.