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I will shamelessly give myself a 5 star review. If you read my work and disagree kindly inform me which part you want me to improve on. I'm here to improve my writing and every constructive review will be appreciated ?
I'm looking forward to it. the first chapter are actually great and i didn't expect the mc to have the power to f****** possess a creature soul and obtain the creatures skills one once they die. it's really dumb incredible. the power is quite creative but i think that the author was inspired from you Ywatch (i don't know how to spell it) enlightenment from bleach.
I read 36 chapters while writing this.Pros:-Fluffy RomanceYandereSensible MCWholesomeRaiden shogunCons:-No world building [like mc didn't even research about what this whole world is like flat or oval]Less fleshed out charactersNeeds more chapter
Quite an interesting read. keep it up author
"What? Of course not, but do you want me to just pretend to be like you?"
Zuuuuuum!
"Ha ha ha ha, now give me potion of angry". Dark laughing.
"Yes, we have come to an `understanding´," Alucard remarked drily.
Jesus: you cannot just name any country as Nipples, you know.
You'll never shine if you don't glow
Didn't make sense not to live for fun